Brown Days

May 11, 2011
By musicispassion PLATINUM, Perris, California
musicispassion PLATINUM, Perris, California
35 articles 0 photos 735 comments

Favorite Quote:
" Life is never easy for those who dream."
There are so many other quotes i need pages to write them


On brown days I feel warm
like a house
full of love and warmth
and fresh baked
chocolate chip cookies
on a snowy winter day


The author's comments:
This was a class assignment.

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Kai17 GOLD said...
on Jul. 25 2011 at 12:07 pm
Kai17 GOLD, Spokane, Washington
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Favorite Quote:
*beepbeep*
"Where to, Miss?"
"To the stars."

If all of these are class assignments, I wish I had that class. ;)

on Jul. 3 2011 at 3:16 am
musicispassion PLATINUM, Perris, California
35 articles 0 photos 735 comments

Favorite Quote:
" Life is never easy for those who dream."
There are so many other quotes i need pages to write them

thanks it means alot

on Jul. 3 2011 at 2:59 am
IAmWhoIWantToBe PLATINUM, Manila, Other
41 articles 0 photos 650 comments

Favorite Quote:
‎"I’m learning how to drown out the constant noise that is such an inseparable part of my life. I don’t have to prove anything to anyone. I only have to follow my heart and concentrate on what I want to say to the world: I run my world." - Beyoncé

kudos to you! I don't know if I would ever be writing something good as this given it was just an assignment?

Oh, when did I even make assignments? LOL..

Anyway, I really like this. :)

on Jun. 28 2011 at 1:22 am
musicispassion PLATINUM, Perris, California
35 articles 0 photos 735 comments

Favorite Quote:
" Life is never easy for those who dream."
There are so many other quotes i need pages to write them

whe i wrote this one i was thinking of gooey warm mlt in ur mouth chocolate hip cookies that u make with ur mom and grandma and leave em on a tray come back and they're gon mmmmmm

on Jun. 28 2011 at 1:21 am
musicispassion PLATINUM, Perris, California
35 articles 0 photos 735 comments

Favorite Quote:
" Life is never easy for those who dream."
There are so many other quotes i need pages to write them

thanks i love to hear feedback positive or negative

on Jun. 16 2011 at 9:24 pm
CarrieAnn13 GOLD, Goodsoil, Other
12 articles 10 photos 1648 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I love deadlines. I like the whooshing sound they make as they fly by." --Douglas Adams

"The object of life is not to be on the side of the majority, but to escape finding oneself in the ranks of the insane." --Marcus Aurelius

This was a nice, simple poem. The only criticism I have is that using 'warm' and 'warmth' was a little bit redundant. But hey, what do I know about poems?

on Jun. 16 2011 at 11:29 am
JoPepper PLATINUM, Annandale, Virginia
35 articles 0 photos 782 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Freedom is the ability to not care what the other person thinks."

"Not all those who wander are lost" --JRR Tolkien

"When you are listening to music it is better to cover your eyes than your ears." --Jose' Bergamin

You're welcome!!!!!!!

austenite GOLD said...
on Jun. 15 2011 at 7:06 pm
austenite GOLD, River Falls, Wisconsin
13 articles 0 photos 177 comments

Favorite Quote:
...one word from you will silence me forever. If, however, your feelings have changed, I will have to tell you: you have bewitched me, body and soul, and I love....I love...I love you. I never wish to be parted from you from this day on. -Mr. Darcy

Yum - chocolate chip cookies :) Short and simple poem - nice!

on Jun. 15 2011 at 6:54 pm
musicispassion PLATINUM, Perris, California
35 articles 0 photos 735 comments

Favorite Quote:
" Life is never easy for those who dream."
There are so many other quotes i need pages to write them

thanks

 


on Jun. 15 2011 at 2:33 pm
JoPepper PLATINUM, Annandale, Virginia
35 articles 0 photos 782 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Freedom is the ability to not care what the other person thinks."

"Not all those who wander are lost" --JRR Tolkien

"When you are listening to music it is better to cover your eyes than your ears." --Jose' Bergamin

That was good short and to the point I like poems like that! Great job!!!!


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