Feeling

May 11, 2011
By musicispassion PLATINUM, Perris, California
musicispassion PLATINUM, Perris, California
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Favorite Quote:
" Life is never easy for those who dream."
There are so many other quotes i need pages to write them


I feel them
like a bird's wings
flapping inside me
waiting to burst
with the
love, joy, passion, and energy
they had before
but i realize it is only
them sending me a
message
I an happy up here in heaven


The author's comments:
I was thinking about my great-grandma who recently passed who I feel inside me everday your loved ones never leave you

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on Jul. 24 2011 at 10:32 pm
musicispassion PLATINUM, Perris, California
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Favorite Quote:
" Life is never easy for those who dream."
There are so many other quotes i need pages to write them

thanks a lot :P

on Jul. 24 2011 at 3:22 pm
Hazel-daisy GOLD, --, Other
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Favorite Quote:
It takes a lot of courage to show your dreams to someone else - Erna Bombeck

In three words i can sum up everything I've learned in life: it goes on -Robert Frost

Live, Love, Laugh - ______

Hope, Love, breathe <3 - Me

i really like it, its really sweet :)

on Jul. 20 2011 at 11:10 pm
musicispassion PLATINUM, Perris, California
35 articles 0 photos 735 comments

Favorite Quote:
" Life is never easy for those who dream."
There are so many other quotes i need pages to write them

how so? since i don't know who u r

on Jul. 20 2011 at 12:53 am
Fuggin_Fuggers SILVER, San Jacinto, California
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Favorite Quote:
"Sometimes it not about winning the race,its just being apart of it."
"Life's like an hour glass glued to a table."

Loved it sooo much i can relate ...i miss you

 


on Jul. 8 2011 at 1:00 pm
musicispassion PLATINUM, Perris, California
35 articles 0 photos 735 comments

Favorite Quote:
" Life is never easy for those who dream."
There are so many other quotes i need pages to write them

thank you !! :P

sakina GOLD said...
on Jul. 8 2011 at 12:45 am
sakina GOLD, Chennai, Other
18 articles 13 photos 173 comments

Favorite Quote:
A negative thinker See's a difficulty in every opportunity but a positive thinker sees an opportunity in every difficulty. So always think positive and u'll surely B successful in LIFE.
-Hazrat Ali (A.S)

It's a great poem...

on Jul. 1 2011 at 9:03 pm
musicispassion PLATINUM, Perris, California
35 articles 0 photos 735 comments

Favorite Quote:
" Life is never easy for those who dream."
There are so many other quotes i need pages to write them

thanks and i feel her with me always sorry about the mistake

on Jul. 1 2011 at 2:18 pm
CarrieAnn13 GOLD, Goodsoil, Other
12 articles 10 photos 1648 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I love deadlines. I like the whooshing sound they make as they fly by." --Douglas Adams

"The object of life is not to be on the side of the majority, but to escape finding oneself in the ranks of the insane." --Marcus Aurelius

Great imagery, once again.  I know how you feel; my grandmother I was very close to passed away when I was ten and I still feel her near me.  My only criticism: you forgot to capitalize 'i'.

on Jun. 28 2011 at 1:20 am
musicispassion PLATINUM, Perris, California
35 articles 0 photos 735 comments

Favorite Quote:
" Life is never easy for those who dream."
There are so many other quotes i need pages to write them

don't u just love grandmas they're awesome they make the world go round along with crayons ninjas sesame street moms and sugar

austenite GOLD said...
on Jun. 15 2011 at 7:10 pm
austenite GOLD, River Falls, Wisconsin
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Favorite Quote:
...one word from you will silence me forever. If, however, your feelings have changed, I will have to tell you: you have bewitched me, body and soul, and I love....I love...I love you. I never wish to be parted from you from this day on. -Mr. Darcy

I love the imagery you have in all your poems! And I really like how you wrote this for your late great-grandma - I wrote one for mine as well!

on Jun. 15 2011 at 6:54 pm
musicispassion PLATINUM, Perris, California
35 articles 0 photos 735 comments

Favorite Quote:
" Life is never easy for those who dream."
There are so many other quotes i need pages to write them

sorry thanks

on Jun. 15 2011 at 2:28 pm
JoPepper PLATINUM, Annandale, Virginia
35 articles 0 photos 782 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Freedom is the ability to not care what the other person thinks."

"Not all those who wander are lost" --JRR Tolkien

"When you are listening to music it is better to cover your eyes than your ears." --Jose' Bergamin

That was so sweet I noticed two mistakes but nothing major: you put "an" instead of "am" and you forgot to capitalize the "I" one the eighth line.  Other than that really good!!!!! :))


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