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As soon as I take off my sandals
I walk through the cool, wet sand on my feet
It was late afternoon and the skies were light blue
When I saw the water, it made me smile
The still water is a sign of calmness, relaxed or laid back
The water happened to be a lot bluer when I was happy
I watched the waves move back and forth along the sand
It felt as if my heart was healed from sorrow that I carried
The pain hurt so much but the water calmed me
Then I put my feet in the water and continued walking
The water was cool and relaxing
While I’m walking, so many thoughts are slowly appearing in my mind
This type of atmosphere is perfect for thinking
The wind brushed past my face gesturing me to turn around
As soon as I turned around, my eyes began to shine like blue sapphires
I saw the colors of orange, yellow around the bright sun
The streaks were endless throughout the skies
The sunset with the waves created a beautiful atmosphere
Before I left, the wind sadly blew across the water making ripples
This was a beautiful atmosphere
One that I would imagine to be a dream
A place to be alone, A place to think
Most of all, a place to heal through time



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RozaB said...
Jul. 4, 2011 at 11:23 am:
You know, the greatest thing about your writing is that I don't understand the meaning of your writing until the very end, where it all falls together. And I love that--just one sentence or one word that truly describes it all.
 
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Jul. 7, 2011 at 12:53 am :
Thank you. It means a lot to me.
 
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