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Dear Girl at the Piano

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Your song tugged at my heart.
as you gripped your hands around the string of my soul you spun me around.
Dizzy from Love I fell to the ground.
Lost in your deep brown eyes, only your voice could lift me up again.
Tipping over I realize I can't walk without you.
I can't breath without you
I can't sing without you
I can't live without you
Sing to me once more
Oh dear girl at the piano





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Alexandrathepoet This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jun. 13, 2011 at 9:41 pm
This poem is truly beautiful, if the girl is smart, she'll see that too! Good luck!
 
wespired replied...
Jun. 14, 2011 at 5:54 pm
That would be nice but she's sooo busy all the time. I'm afraid she'll just put me off and say I don't have time for a relationship right now.
 
Anagam replied...
Jun. 14, 2011 at 10:14 pm
my best advice: go 4 it! if she says no ok u get 2 mov on, if she says yes, yaay!! but honestly i think it hurts 2 keep dose feelins 2 urself :D
 
Anagam said...
Jun. 13, 2011 at 3:38 pm

awesome!! (leave da note 4 her anonymously!! :D )

 

 
Anagam replied...
Jun. 13, 2011 at 3:40 pm
p.s. if u got anytime wat so ever plz check out my poems. even if u just read one. any feedback on how im doin is appreciated!!! thks
 
wespired replied...
Jun. 14, 2011 at 5:53 pm
awww thanks. I think it would be too obviouse though. I came to this small singer song writer thing which she did and we were eye locked the whole time. It's just too strong possibly :(
 
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