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May 10, 2011
By abby7 SILVER, Bardwell, Kentucky
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abby7 SILVER, Bardwell, Kentucky
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"If lifes not what you dream, in the end its better than you expected" - my cousin Josie Hannah Gray

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Caught in that frozen moment.
What shall I do?
I'm desperate for you.
I need you.. I love you
Please, please,
Don't leave me.

© Yisrawayl G., Philadelphia, PA

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abby7 SILVER said...
on Jun. 11 2011 at 11:26 pm
abby7 SILVER, Bardwell, Kentucky
7 articles 0 photos 25 comments

Favorite Quote:
"If lifes not what you dream, in the end its better than you expected" - my cousin Josie Hannah Gray

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thanks very much!:) and God bless you too!
AndySixxLover GOLD said...
on Jun. 11 2011 at 6:35 pm
AndySixxLover GOLD, Weatherford, Texas
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These violent delights have violent ends and in there triumph die like fire and powder in witch their kiss consume

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Its wonderful I love it its short and simple and discribes exactly what im feeling
RealPam1992 GOLD said...
on Jun. 11 2011 at 1:50 am
RealPam1992 GOLD, Alexandria, Virginia
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Is like you took those words right out of my heart. Totally describes how i'm feeling now. I love it.
joyfuldancer SILVER said...
on Jun. 11 2011 at 12:21 am
joyfuldancer SILVER, Easton, Maryland
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So beautiful!  I love the simplicity of this work.  It gets right down to the point.  I hope to see more work like this and I myself shall probably be writing some things like this.  Great job, God bless!
abby7 SILVER said...
on Jun. 11 2011 at 12:21 am
abby7 SILVER, Bardwell, Kentucky
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"If lifes not what you dream, in the end its better than you expected" - my cousin Josie Hannah Gray

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thanks :)        
abby7 SILVER said...
on Jun. 11 2011 at 12:20 am
abby7 SILVER, Bardwell, Kentucky
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"If lifes not what you dream, in the end its better than you expected" - my cousin Josie Hannah Gray

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thanks & sure will(:
kaykaybeck PLATINUM said...
on Jun. 10 2011 at 12:58 pm
kaykaybeck PLATINUM, Petersburg, Michigan
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This was very good (: please check out some of my work (:
Eliseee BRONZE said...
on Jun. 9 2011 at 11:51 pm
Eliseee BRONZE, Lynwood, Illinois
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I love how the poem is so short but says so much.!
abby7 SILVER said...
on Jun. 9 2011 at 10:54 pm
abby7 SILVER, Bardwell, Kentucky
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Thanks and yea i can check out the rest of mine and tell me what u think
Alice_C SILVER said...
on Jun. 9 2011 at 10:41 pm
Alice_C SILVER, Edgewood, Iowa
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Very well put, its great.

Can you check out my work?

abby7 SILVER said...
on Jun. 9 2011 at 10:22 pm
abby7 SILVER, Bardwell, Kentucky
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"If lifes not what you dream, in the end its better than you expected" - my cousin Josie Hannah Gray

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Thanks for the comment :)
Delliebug BRONZE said...
on Jun. 9 2011 at 7:20 pm
Delliebug BRONZE, Arima, Other
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I love it..plain and simple...:)