I'm Fine

May 7, 2011
If you lookme in the eye
and try to find my soul
maybe you'll realize
on me, this pain is taking a toll

You think you know
but you dont
You'll try to know
but you won't

I'm not who you think I am
Don't bother trying to understand
an enigma, let my life be
it doesn't matter if there's something wrong with me

I guess there's no point in wasting your time
If you ask me, I'll say I'm fine





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Megan.J.B said...
Jul. 27, 2011 at 6:55 pm
I liked the last lines, they summed it up nicely. My only criticism is that I found the second stanza a little too cliche.
 
.Izzy. said...
Jul. 18, 2011 at 1:18 pm
Loved the last two lines! Perfect way to end the beautiful poem
 
CarrieAnn13 said...
Jul. 17, 2011 at 9:50 pm
Beautiful!  My only criticism is you forgot the apostrophe in 'don't'.
 
Delictious said...
Jul. 17, 2011 at 7:53 pm
I liked the last stanza, that was really nice(: And the word use of enigma, that was very clever as well. I don't think I've ever even seen that word before :D I like it!
 
hanging_girl_666 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jul. 17, 2011 at 6:42 pm
Ending was my favorite part. Im not to sure if i liked the second stanza though.. o.o but other than that i loved it.
 
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