Matter of Time

May 10, 2011
By cheetoz45680 DIAMOND, Bridgeport, Connecticut
cheetoz45680 DIAMOND, Bridgeport, Connecticut
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Favorite Quote:
Pain is inevitable, suffering is optional.


She's stapled shut,
She's bottled up inside,
She feels so much pain,
That is impossible to hide.

You left so miserably,
You never said goodbye,
You lead her towards a path,
Where her life would be the goodbye.

Useless cries,
Silently she screams,
Refuses to breath,
She won't be saved it seems.

She knows it's wrong,
But it makes her feel good,
Maybe if she were happy,
Stop she would.

She feels satisfied,
But it ends too fast,
It brings her to life,
She just wishes it could last.

It's not enough anymore,
It goes from bad to worse,
She feels she can't stop,
It has become her curse.

It's only a matter of time,
Before it all comes to an end,
She either gets better,
Or her life will end.


The author's comments:
I beg you guys to comment on what you think about this poem. What story are you getting from the way i wrote it?? Please comment xp

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on Aug. 9 2011 at 4:50 pm
cheetoz45680 DIAMOND, Bridgeport, Connecticut
88 articles 0 photos 69 comments

Favorite Quote:
Pain is inevitable, suffering is optional.

Thank you so much. That means alot.

on Aug. 7 2011 at 2:15 am
kirabroomfield BRONZE, Springfield Il, Illinois
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this poem is beatiful and deep..!! ur work is great. :)

on Jun. 9 2011 at 12:26 pm
Finding-me PLATINUM, Dover-Foxcroft, Maine
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Favorite Quote:
It's kind of fun to do the impossible

This is well written, leaving just enough to the imagination, we guess at her problem, and i really liked the ending. u are a good wrighter.


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