Falling Heart

May 10, 2011
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The wind blows,
it sweeps my heart with it.
It picks it up and tosses it around.
I want my heart back,
I feel hopeless without it,
watching it being tossed in the air by the wind.
I want it back, safe inside my chest.
What if the wind drops it?
What if the wind drops it,
and I can’t catch it?
What then?
How will I put my heart back together again?
Once the wind drops it,
which it will, eventually.
Eventually it will die down.
it will die,
my heart will drop,
and I will die.
I will die without my heart.

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FallingAlways said...
Jun. 8, 2011 at 8:17 pm

You're writing style is amazing. It painted this picture in my mind and really spoke to a situation I'm going through. Actually it just basically SPOKE TO ME. :) :) Thanks so much and keep on writing. You're an amazing writer with TONS TONS TONS of potential.

Good luck. :)

Forever and Always,
Nicole :)

Roselynne replied...
Jun. 8, 2011 at 8:24 pm
Thank you so much, it's really encouraging when other people comment on my writing and they like it, it's encouraging when friends do it but it's different when someone you don't know agrees with them :D
changeable said...
Jun. 8, 2011 at 6:51 pm
The imagery was fantastic, and it was actually pretty touching for a shorter poem.
Roselynne replied...
Jun. 8, 2011 at 7:27 pm
Gee thanks :D
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