May 9, 2011
Deep inside, she's burning
Burning from the love that won't happen
She stays up late thinking about him,
Completely impossible to get him out of her mind
She fell head over heels for someone who doesn't love her back

Some nights she cried over him
Some she ignored him, without much luck
All she could do was dream, wish it'd happen
She thought about how he'd do it,
The conversations they'd have, but for now
She must wait impatiently and sink back into reality..

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FallingAlways said...
Jun. 8, 2011 at 8:11 pm

Everybody has wishes. Everyone craves, doubts, cries, WANTS what they can't have </3. In this poem you really explained how that kind of thing all mixes together in a very shy, sensitive, quiet yet loud in it's whole 'persona' way. It brings to mind the source of heartbreak, of reality, of dreaming about something and waking up to its absense.

You did an extremely good job on this poem. :)

Well, just keep on keeping on.

Forever and Always,

Nicole :)

sunnyandsugar This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jun. 8, 2011 at 6:17 pm
I hope you get your wish...
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