May 9, 2011
By BrookeElizabeth SILVER, Decatur, Illinois
BrookeElizabeth SILVER, Decatur, Illinois
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Favorite Quote:
"Live your life freely, don't be scared to fall."

Deep inside, she's burning
Burning from the love that won't happen
She stays up late thinking about him,
Completely impossible to get him out of her mind
She fell head over heels for someone who doesn't love her back

Some nights she cried over him
Some she ignored him, without much luck
All she could do was dream, wish it'd happen
She thought about how he'd do it,
The conversations they'd have, but for now
She must wait impatiently and sink back into reality..

The author's comments:
A guy i like inspired me to write this..i do like him, but i know it won't happen. But we all do wish we could have who we want

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on Jun. 8 2011 at 8:11 pm
FallingAlways GOLD, Franklin, Wisconsin
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Favorite Quote:
"The worst mistake anyone can make is being too afraid to make one." -anonymous.

Everybody has wishes. Everyone craves, doubts, cries, WANTS what they can't have </3. In this poem you really explained how that kind of thing all mixes together in a very shy, sensitive, quiet yet loud in it's whole 'persona' way. It brings to mind the source of heartbreak, of reality, of dreaming about something and waking up to its absense.

You did an extremely good job on this poem. :)

Well, just keep on keeping on.

Forever and Always,

Nicole :)

on Jun. 8 2011 at 6:17 pm
Savannainthesky GOLD, West Suffield, Connecticut
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Favorite Quote:
"It may have been in pieces.. but I gave you the best of me"-Jim Morrison(the doors)

I hope you get your wish...

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