IT'S ALL IN THE EYES ....

May 1, 2011
By Manish9 SILVER, Kanpur, Other
Manish9 SILVER, Kanpur, Other
6 articles 12 photos 110 comments

I stay silent as the night
as i stand still under this beautiful moonlit sky,
soaking in the serenity of the world around me.
i hear the murmer of the breeze
which brings with it the cool and calmness to the,
tired souls after the days chaos.

But i stand still,
my eyes fixed at a point in the
vast endless sky.
a storm is raging somewhere,
despite the calmness of the night
that haunts me tonight.

The storm is raging within me
but i refuse to speak of it,
so does my body....

But still she comes to me
and holds me in a loving embrace
"it's going to be alright son'
dont worry....it will", she says.

I look at her astounded, as she
smiles and hugs me again
and says,
" Your eyes betray your body son,
they speak everything and
mine can read them perfectly."

N ow even i smile,
as i relax in her arms, now sure
of the fact that
IT'S ALL IN THE EYES ,
of every mother and son !!


The author's comments:
my first article for this site.... hope ya'll like it .

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Manish9 SILVER said...
on Jan. 20 2012 at 6:35 am
Manish9 SILVER, Kanpur, Other
6 articles 12 photos 110 comments
Aww ... I get it .. There's no harm in finding a little time out from your daily routine to make her feel really loved and appreciated ! p.s : EVery child has a special relation with their parents , it's just that it's not easy to spot !

on Jan. 20 2012 at 6:31 am
recurring_resilience SILVER, Ashburn, Virginia
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Favorite Quote:
"These are the times that try men's souls." - Thomas Paine.

"You don't understand! I coulda had class. I coulda been a contender. I could've been somebody, instead of a bum, which is what I am." - On the Water Front

"This is my place of failure."

Well done! I read it twice to fully get it! I wish I had that kind of relationship with my mom.. Not saying we have a bad one, just not as special as that, y'know?

.king. SILVER said...
on Jan. 17 2012 at 4:04 am
.king. SILVER, Yeux Bien Tres Bien, Other
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Favorite Quote:
( ͡~ ͜ʖ ͡°)

That was Amazing and beautiful, I'll say- i love it...

on Jan. 10 2012 at 5:31 am
WrittenEmotions PLATINUM, Fairhope, Alabama
32 articles 0 photos 209 comments

Favorite Quote:
The only people who don't get anywhere are the people who don't dream of a better place for themselves...

Beautiful.... Emotional... I loved this piece with all of my heart!(: 5/5

on Jan. 9 2012 at 8:17 am
poetidea_myworld_22 PLATINUM, Rediville, South Carolina
39 articles 1 photo 104 comments

Favorite Quote:
"A girl doesn't need anyone who doesn't need her" Marylin Monroe

omg i loved it!!!!!!

on Jan. 6 2012 at 3:27 am
Zinaidia SILVER, Moreno Valley, California
8 articles 3 photos 78 comments

Favorite Quote:
\\\"Whatever you are, be a good one.\\\"

Very intriguing, I think poetry is what you are strongest at. Just work on grammar. Great job!

on Dec. 28 2011 at 12:31 am
SilentVoice BRONZE, Baton Rouge, Louisiana
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Favorite Quote:
We are all a little weird and life's a little weird, and when we find someone whose weirdness is compatible with ours, we join up with them and fall in mutual weirdness and call it love.
~ Unknown ~

This was amazing...shows a true bond between mother and son....keep it up!!

on Nov. 30 2011 at 11:07 pm
RaveFire PLATINUM, Vancouver, Washington
32 articles 1 photo 218 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Sometimes You Have To Give Up Your Life To Save It." ~some book that i don't remember the name of

"Live Life Like There's No Yesterday" ~ random billboard

"If No One Can Hurt You, Then Nobody Loves You" ` ~ Kerli?

wow thats amazing

on Nov. 22 2011 at 6:16 pm
Basketball23 SILVER, Pine Grove, Pennsylvania
8 articles 13 photos 488 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I'm living in a shell with no soul" -Three Days Grace (World So Cold)
"Time still turns the pages of the book it's burned" -Avenged Sevenfold (So Far Away)

No problem:)  And yah, I do.

Manish9 SILVER said...
on Nov. 22 2011 at 1:44 am
Manish9 SILVER, Kanpur, Other
6 articles 12 photos 110 comments
hey thanks .... ya i do have a special relationship with my mum .... don't all of us ????? XD

on Nov. 21 2011 at 7:44 pm
Basketball23 SILVER, Pine Grove, Pennsylvania
8 articles 13 photos 488 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I'm living in a shell with no soul" -Three Days Grace (World So Cold)
"Time still turns the pages of the book it's burned" -Avenged Sevenfold (So Far Away)

This is so cute :)  You've got a special relationship with your mom, don't you??  It seems like it from your poems.

Tigergirl said...
on Sep. 9 2011 at 3:08 pm
Tigergirl, Aurora, Colorado
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Favorite Quote:
"Pepsi....si...si...."

I agree with you so much!

Tigergirl said...
on Sep. 9 2011 at 3:01 pm
Tigergirl, Aurora, Colorado
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Favorite Quote:
"Pepsi....si...si...."

Oh really cool..... :)

on Sep. 3 2011 at 3:00 pm
Destinee BRONZE, Oakville, Other
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Favorite Quote:
Blegh. - Abraham Lincoln

Aw, it's sweet. :)

on Jul. 26 2011 at 11:54 am
skywriter13 SILVER, Washington, District Of Columbia
9 articles 0 photos 15 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Sometimes people are beautiful. Not in looks. Not in what they say. Just in what they are.”

“Don't tell me the moon is shining; show me the glint of light on broken glass.”
― Anton Chekhov

“The role of a writer is not to say what we can all say, but what we are unable to say.”
― Anaïs Nin

*tear* so heartwarming...:) 

sakina GOLD said...
on Jul. 9 2011 at 7:24 am
sakina GOLD, Chennai, Other
18 articles 13 photos 173 comments

Favorite Quote:
A negative thinker See's a difficulty in every opportunity but a positive thinker sees an opportunity in every difficulty. So always think positive and u'll surely B successful in LIFE.
-Hazrat Ali (A.S)

Always my pleasure..And neither did I think there were much Indians...But then again I thought of searching..So I went and checked in advance search...There I found out that there were many from India...

Manish9 SILVER said...
on Jul. 9 2011 at 3:04 am
Manish9 SILVER, Kanpur, Other
6 articles 12 photos 110 comments
hey thanx sakina .... i dint know that there were any more indians on teenink till now .... thanx for ur feedback, really appreciate it ...

sakina GOLD said...
on Jul. 7 2011 at 5:39 am
sakina GOLD, Chennai, Other
18 articles 13 photos 173 comments

Favorite Quote:
A negative thinker See's a difficulty in every opportunity but a positive thinker sees an opportunity in every difficulty. So always think positive and u'll surely B successful in LIFE.
-Hazrat Ali (A.S)

It's an awesome poem..And it has lots of emotions filled in ti..U r truely a very good writer...

on Jul. 5 2011 at 1:02 pm
sherberteater GOLD, Fruita, Colorado
13 articles 13 photos 199 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Friends are God's way of apologizing to us for our families."

Thank God for friends like you!

This is really good. I hope you do great on the your poems to come. :)

 


Manish9 SILVER said...
on Jul. 3 2011 at 10:34 pm
Manish9 SILVER, Kanpur, Other
6 articles 12 photos 110 comments
ey thanx ... you are the first teenink member to comment on my work ...


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