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I stay silent as the night
as i stand still under this beautiful moonlit sky,
soaking in the serenity of the world around me.
i hear the murmer of the breeze
which brings with it the cool and calmness to the,
tired souls after the days chaos.

But i stand still,
my eyes fixed at a point in the
vast endless sky.
a storm is raging somewhere,
despite the calmness of the night
that haunts me tonight.

The storm is raging within me
but i refuse to speak of it,
so does my body....

But still she comes to me
and holds me in a loving embrace
"it's going to be alright son'
dont will", she says.

I look at her astounded, as she
smiles and hugs me again
and says,
" Your eyes betray your body son,
they speak everything and
mine can read them perfectly."

N ow even i smile,
as i relax in her arms, now sure
of the fact that
of every mother and son !!

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recurring_resilience said...
Jan. 20, 2012 at 6:31 am
Well done! I read it twice to fully get it! I wish I had that kind of relationship with my mom.. Not saying we have a bad one, just not as special as that, y'know?
Illuminatus replied...
Jan. 20, 2012 at 6:35 am
Aww ... I get it .. There's no harm in finding a little time out from your daily routine to make her feel really loved and appreciated ! p.s : EVery child has a special relation with their parents , it's just that it's not easy to spot !
Silver2black said...
Jan. 17, 2012 at 4:04 am
That was Amazing and beautiful, I'll say- i love it...
WrittenEmotions said...
Jan. 10, 2012 at 5:31 am
Beautiful.... Emotional... I loved this piece with all of my heart!(: 5/5
poetidea_myworld_22 said...
Jan. 9, 2012 at 8:17 am
omg i loved it!!!!!!
SilentVoice said...
Dec. 28, 2011 at 12:31 am
This was amazing...shows a true bond between mother and son....keep it up!!
BeyondTheBrooke said...
Nov. 30, 2011 at 11:07 pm
wow thats amazing
Basketball23 said...
Nov. 21, 2011 at 7:44 pm
This is so cute :)  You've got a special relationship with your mom, don't you??  It seems like it from your poems.
Illuminatus replied...
Nov. 22, 2011 at 1:44 am
hey thanks .... ya i do have a special relationship with my mum .... don't all of us ????? XD
Basketball23 replied...
Nov. 22, 2011 at 6:16 pm
No problem:)  And yah, I do.
Tigergirl said...
Sept. 9, 2011 at 3:08 pm
I agree with you so much!
Destinee This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Sept. 3, 2011 at 3:00 pm
Aw, it's sweet. :)
skywriter13 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jul. 26, 2011 at 11:54 am
*tear* so heartwarming...:) 
sherberteater said...
Jul. 5, 2011 at 1:02 pm

This is really good. I hope you do great on the your poems to come. :)


Tigergirl said...
Jul. 2, 2011 at 8:42 pm
I so agree with you! :)
Tigergirl said...
Jul. 2, 2011 at 8:24 pm
Oh my I love this poem it is just so heart tuching!
Illuminatus replied...
Jul. 3, 2011 at 10:34 pm
ey thanx ... you are the first teenink member to comment on my work ...
Tigergirl replied...
Sept. 9, 2011 at 3:01 pm
Oh really cool..... :)
laus deo said...
Jun. 30, 2011 at 1:37 am
good1 yr.... future's wordsworth....:-)
EspumosoNayade said...
Jun. 28, 2011 at 11:31 pm
Very xpressive! Keep it up! Hoping to see much more of b'ful poetry from you! :-)
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