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Lying in a meadow,
Hiding in the grass.
Staring at the stars,
But a thought distracts me.
All I think about is you, and
The way you make me feel.

I love the way you smile,
I love the way you laugh,
I love the way your eyes glitter,
When you are standing in the light.

I love the way you we talk for hours,
I love the way you listen.
I love the way we stay on the phone for hours,
But say nothing at all.

I love the way you stand up for me,
I love the way you tease me.
I love the way you say hello,
Every morning I walk in.
Most of all I love the way you stay by me,
No matter where I am.

So next time when I am lying in a meadow,
And I'm hiding in the grass.
When I'm staring at the stars,
You will be besides me





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off-by-oneThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Jun. 22, 2011 at 9:10 pm
Awwwwww :) How sweet.... I love it!!!
 
OffMyRocker... said...
Jun. 22, 2011 at 1:23 pm
I really no constructive criticism for this piece.  It coveys your emotion very well and it drew me in.  I like when someones work is able to do that. The only thing that I saw was that the last line should be beside instead of besides.
 
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