demon within

May 24, 2011
By ninjajump BRONZE, Harrisonburg, Virginia
ninjajump BRONZE, Harrisonburg, Virginia
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Favorite Quote:
life is the greatest gift, but it is also the heaviest burdon

The hate lurks within. Just waiting to spring up and attack. It doesn't show itself all the time but i know its there. I have to be careful, i have to watch what i do sure i don't let the beast out. there's time where i black out and i can't remember anything that happens. I know the monster, the hellish demon wants out. Every time i get a little angry i can feel it rising up in my stomach. It wants out it wants to attack. It wants to get out and destroy this world i live in. ruin all my progress. every day its a struggle to keep the beast inside.

The author's comments:
it kind of how i feel day to day.

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on Jun. 3 2011 at 7:36 pm
PennyM.L SILVER, Lynwood, California
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wow this is really good! the only constructive criticism i have for you is that you shouldve used stanzas, tjey wouldve created a better flow. regardless it's still good :) keep writing! :)

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