Being under water

April 11, 2011
By KPope BRONZE, Ottumwa, Iowa
KPope BRONZE, Ottumwa, Iowa
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Layin' in the bathtub taking a bath
Thinking about all of your problems
Flooding your mind
Takes a deep breath and dives under water
The world becomes mute
No more sound from above
All you hear is THUMP! THUMP! THUMP!
The sound of your heart pounding in your chest
All your problems gone away
Like they were never there
Your worlds perfect
Your not worried about anything
Your starting to need oxygen
But hoping you could stay there forever
Taking every second for granted
Knowing that time is almost up
Starting to lift back up
Water rushing past your face
Listening to the use to be silence become noisy once more
Entering back into the real world
Missing the quietness of your own world
No more worries nor problems in that world
Gets you excited
To go back under again


The author's comments:
I wrote this after taking a bath and realizing why i love being underwater so much

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