April 10, 2011
A ruler,
as unknown as true love
as feared as death
the lonely man’s last hope

Plentiful for some
empty for others.


You or destiny
Your destiny

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RealRiter This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Feb. 23, 2015 at 10:37 pm
Cool, cool, like it. Short and sweet. I`d say to MAYBE, not always even, but MAYBE (sense I don`t want to change your style of writing at all) try changing some of the awesome tongue twisters into something a little more meaningful or adding a little more to a poem next time. You like to write about not solid (or random) or abstract things (a little less abstract than me), like me. Love it. Your style is awesome (as always), but I`m not gonna vote on this one. I`m gonna wait until I see another ... (more »)
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