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I see the blood
Beautiful red blood
It runs it all directions
Spreading away from me.
I take a deep breath and
Close my eyes, seeing his beautiful face
He's so scared,
he holds my body trying
Oh, so hard to bring me back
Undo my doings.
I love him for it but i gave up
I whisper to him
" Live on...for both of us. "



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surfergirl98 said...
Mar. 21, 2012 at 6:58 pm:

this is awesome.  little disturbing though. but i praise your work

 

 
Kitty.Meow.Daly replied...
Mar. 21, 2012 at 7:04 pm :
It was supposed to be a little on the disturbed side. :) But thank you 
 
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Shmelmo said...
Mar. 21, 2012 at 6:39 pm:
This is so sad!! It has a lot of emotion in it. I really like your personification.. nicely done! Hang in there!! :)
 
Kitty.Meow.Daly replied...
Mar. 21, 2012 at 6:43 pm :
Thank you very much, I am doing a lot better since I wrote this :) a lot happier too :)
 
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JaneCapelle This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jan. 4, 2012 at 4:08 pm:
Oh my gosh, this is so sad...:( I am so sorry you were this depressed but the poem is really good......its so sad :,(
 
Kitty.Meow.Daly replied...
Jan. 4, 2012 at 4:14 pm :
Life gets rough but I'm making a clean start this year. thank you though :)
 
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silver47 said...
Nov. 28, 2011 at 8:06 pm:
beautifully sad
 
3mo_sw33ts replied...
Feb. 7, 2012 at 5:38 pm :
I am crying!!! *sniff*
 
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