The Letter

May 22, 2011
By Anonymous

Dear boy,
I want you to be by my side at all times.
I want you to call me day or night just to say you love me.
I want you to put your hand in mine, when we walk together.
I want you to tell the others that I am the perfect girl for you.
I want our story to never end.
I want our story to be epic, a story no human could forget.

But would it be wrong if I didn’t want an sappy love story?
That when/if we broke up we wouldn’t run to each other holding on to what we know wont work.
Would it be wrong to not want what I see?
I just want you to love, if its me good but if its not don’t learn to love me because you will just hurt me

Is it bad to let go of something so precious no girl would even think of letting go?

Guess what, I am not you average princeses.
I don’t want a love that you must prove to me.
I want the love I can see.
The love nobody could see but me and you.
I could ask for all those things, but I know I wont get any because I don’t want it.
I don’t need it.

If our love was as pure as you say it is then you wouldn’t be with her…… Would You??

The author's comments:
So many kinds of love. its just that i think that if the boy loves me then thats great if the boy doesnt love me and i love him then i dont want someone that has to learn to love me i want them to know they do indeed love me>

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TheSGF BRONZE said...
on Jun. 3 2011 at 9:46 pm
TheSGF BRONZE, New York, New York
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I'm telling you this is the best peom i ever read! You are a genius this is a beautiful love story!

on Jun. 3 2011 at 6:30 pm
Roseyalia SILVER, Don&#39t Need To Know, California
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Favorite Quote:
Take my love, take my land, take me where I cannot stand. I don't care, I'm still free, you can't take the sky from me. Take me out to the black. Tell 'em I ain't coming back. Burn the land and boil the sea, but you can't take the sky from me.

This is such a true love story.  I totally feel the same way.  You really have a way with words.  Good job!  And please read and review my works, if you have a chance.  Thanks!

on Jun. 3 2011 at 12:56 pm
Lauren826 SILVER, Old River, Texas
5 articles 3 photos 8 comments

Favorite Quote:
"To thine own self be true." - Christina Perri.

"Nothing lasts forever for all good things its true id rather trade it all by somehow saving you." - Avenged Sevenfold.

I really like this its good

-im new to this, how do you know when people start reading your work?

kissjamie GOLD said...
on Jun. 1 2011 at 8:24 pm
kissjamie GOLD, Orlando, Florida
13 articles 3 photos 2 comments

Favorite Quote:
Do what makes you happy. Be with who makes you smile. Laugh as much as you breath.Love as long as you live.

This is really cute i love it!

on Jun. 1 2011 at 3:37 pm
the_one_behind_the_mask BRONZE, Indanapolis, Indiana
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Favorite Quote:
dont wast time been upset that time youl never get bak

i loved i i only wish i wrote it but i loved it

Kai17 GOLD said...
on May. 31 2011 at 9:06 pm
Kai17 GOLD, Spokane, Washington
17 articles 5 photos 340 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Where to, Miss?"
"To the stars."

You kept me hanging to the very end. Great job.

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