Prey Sweet Dreams

April 23, 2011
By WriterGirl33 PLATINUM, Tulsa, Oklahoma
WriterGirl33 PLATINUM, Tulsa, Oklahoma
26 articles 0 photos 18 comments

Favorite Quote:
It is better to not speak and let people think you are a fool, than to open your mouth and remove all doubt.


Hunts can be fun, to find that deer.
Until your the hunted.
You run and scream.
Who can hear your cries of,
"Save me?"
Your thrown on the pavement.
Death hovers above your face.
To scared to move but you want
to see the killer!
Metal presses against your head.
Will he shoot you dead or
mute you with terror?
Sweat drips down face.
...
Eyes open!
Where am I, Why a bed?
It's a haunting dream.
Don't be fooled.
This time it's a dream,
don't let horror rule,
but always be ready to become the
Prey.


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sakina GOLD said...
on Jul. 1 2011 at 12:15 am
sakina GOLD, Chennai, Other
18 articles 13 photos 173 comments

Favorite Quote:
A negative thinker See's a difficulty in every opportunity but a positive thinker sees an opportunity in every difficulty. So always think positive and u'll surely B successful in LIFE.
-Hazrat Ali (A.S)

It's a nice poem... And wat id like to say is that U used To instead of Too in the 8th line of ur poem.. The rest is just fine..

on Jun. 30 2011 at 9:32 pm
PaRaNoRmAl627 GOLD, Mountainside, New Jersey
15 articles 0 photos 297 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Do what you want. If it's something you'll regret in the morning, sleep late."

this is haunting...the only negative thing i have to say is that you used "your" where you should have used "you're." im a grammar freak, so don't let that bother you too much :p the piece was really good :) congratss




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