Play Me Not

April 23, 2011
Why did you choose
Why am I your
Why did you have to steal my breath?
Why do you make me love
Why do rake my heart piece by piece?
Why do you treat me like your tease?
Why don't you realize that I can feel the pain?
because you want fame from your
or do you just get scared of a four letter word called

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.Izzy. said...
Jul. 1, 2011 at 6:26 pm
I can relate to this unfortunately :/ The one thing I would suggest is that you would make this flow a little seemed choppy. Other than that, I liked this a lot. Keep writing!
Aftershock said...
Jul. 1, 2011 at 4:52 pm
I didn't like the "LOVE" lines. It was a letdown to an amazing poem.
sakina said...
Jul. 1, 2011 at 12:07 am

i understood wat ur tryin to say but it doesn't have a flow... And its a  nice way to express ur feeling's... check out my work:)


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