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Play Me Not

Why did you choose
me?
Why am I your
victim?
Why did you have to steal my breath?
Why do you make me love
you?
Why do rake my heart piece by piece?
Why do you treat me like your tease?
Why don't you realize that I can feel the pain?
...
because you want fame from your
friends?
or do you just get scared of a four letter word called
LOVE?




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.Izzy. said...
Jul. 1, 2011 at 6:26 pm:
I can relate to this unfortunately :/ The one thing I would suggest is that you would make this flow a little better...it seemed choppy. Other than that, I liked this a lot. Keep writing!
 
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Aftershock said...
Jul. 1, 2011 at 4:52 pm:
I didn't like the "LOVE" lines. It was a letdown to an amazing poem.
 
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sakinaThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Jul. 1, 2011 at 12:07 am:

i understood wat ur tryin to say but it doesn't have a flow... And its a  nice way to express ur feeling's... check out my work:)

 

 
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