Play Me Not

April 23, 2011
By WriterGirl33 PLATINUM, Tulsa, Oklahoma
WriterGirl33 PLATINUM, Tulsa, Oklahoma
26 articles 0 photos 18 comments

Favorite Quote:
It is better to not speak and let people think you are a fool, than to open your mouth and remove all doubt.


Why did you choose
me?
Why am I your
victim?
Why did you have to steal my breath?
Why do you make me love
you?
Why do rake my heart piece by piece?
Why do you treat me like your tease?
Why don't you realize that I can feel the pain?
...
because you want fame from your
friends?
or do you just get scared of a four letter word called
LOVE?


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.Izzy. BRONZE said...
on Jul. 1 2011 at 6:26 pm
.Izzy. BRONZE, Broadview Heights, Ohio
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I can relate to this unfortunately :/ The one thing I would suggest is that you would make this flow a little better...it seemed choppy. Other than that, I liked this a lot. Keep writing!

on Jul. 1 2011 at 4:52 pm
ChildOfThePast SILVER, Raleigh, North Carolina
9 articles 0 photos 46 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Things change. And friends leave. And life doesn’t stop for anybody."

I didn't like the "LOVE" lines. It was a letdown to an amazing poem.

sakina GOLD said...
on Jul. 1 2011 at 12:07 am
sakina GOLD, Chennai, Other
18 articles 13 photos 173 comments

Favorite Quote:
A negative thinker See's a difficulty in every opportunity but a positive thinker sees an opportunity in every difficulty. So always think positive and u'll surely B successful in LIFE.
-Hazrat Ali (A.S)

i understood wat ur tryin to say but it doesn't have a flow... And its a  nice way to express ur feeling's... check out my work:)

 



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