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Fifteen Seconds.

April 22, 2011
By HaleyDRog. GOLD, Easley, South Carolina
HaleyDRog. GOLD, Easley, South Carolina
11 articles 14 photos 291 comments

Favorite Quote:
In three words I can sum up everything I've learned about life. It goes on. -Robert Frost


Fifteen seconds.
Fifteen seconds was all it took to change my life forever.
We were on our way to Pumpers.
Yeah I know, Pumpers?

I was looking out the window..

(BANG)(BAM)(SCREECH)

The scream was excruciating.
The glass went everywhere.
The pitch of the tire was explosive.

Fifteen seconds.
Fifteen seconds was all it took for the eighteen wheeler to take the life of an innocent bystander.

The DUI explained everything.

In the blink of an eye, the man was dead.
It took fifteen seconds to change the world around me.

Fifteen horrifying seconds.



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on Jun. 14 2011 at 2:19 pm
SecretFlame PLATINUM, Portland, Oregon
20 articles 1 photo 373 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I have a life. I just choose to ignore it."
-one of my friends

This is very good, but it could have been a little longer, and you could have added some more detail, but the rhythm and theme were great. 

on Jun. 13 2011 at 10:26 pm
HaleyDRog. GOLD, Easley, South Carolina
11 articles 14 photos 291 comments

Favorite Quote:
In three words I can sum up everything I've learned about life. It goes on. -Robert Frost

Thank you so much!

CarolynQ GOLD said...
on Jun. 13 2011 at 9:59 pm
CarolynQ GOLD, Manalapan, New Jersey
10 articles 0 photos 220 comments
Very real I like this a lot. In the blink of an eye anything can happen. Great theme

on Jun. 5 2011 at 11:18 am
JoPepper PLATINUM, Annandale, Virginia
35 articles 0 photos 782 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Freedom is the ability to not care what the other person thinks."

"Not all those who wander are lost" --JRR Tolkien

"When you are listening to music it is better to cover your eyes than your ears." --Jose' Bergamin

you're welcome!!!! :))

on Jun. 5 2011 at 10:45 am
HaleyDRog. GOLD, Easley, South Carolina
11 articles 14 photos 291 comments

Favorite Quote:
In three words I can sum up everything I've learned about life. It goes on. -Robert Frost

Thank you! I really appreciate it!

on Jun. 5 2011 at 10:43 am
HaleyDRog. GOLD, Easley, South Carolina
11 articles 14 photos 291 comments

Favorite Quote:
In three words I can sum up everything I've learned about life. It goes on. -Robert Frost

Thank you! And no, this isn't from a real life experience.

on Jun. 4 2011 at 7:13 pm
JoPepper PLATINUM, Annandale, Virginia
35 articles 0 photos 782 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Freedom is the ability to not care what the other person thinks."

"Not all those who wander are lost" --JRR Tolkien

"When you are listening to music it is better to cover your eyes than your ears." --Jose' Bergamin

I loved it.... Ecspecially the last line!!!!!!! :D so sad so true!!!!

on Jun. 4 2011 at 2:51 pm
JustAnotherOwl SILVER, Unknown, New York
6 articles 0 photos 378 comments

Favorite Quote:
"See, we don't really care who you are;
Everyone is capable of looking up and wishing on a star.
So catch it, so contagious, this day-dreamer's disease,
And hope can be your sword, slaying darkness with belief."

"Sanctuary"- Paradise Fears

This is sad. Is it from real life experience? Anyway, very good! (:

on Jun. 4 2011 at 11:48 am
HaleyDRog. GOLD, Easley, South Carolina
11 articles 14 photos 291 comments

Favorite Quote:
In three words I can sum up everything I've learned about life. It goes on. -Robert Frost

Thank you!

on Jun. 4 2011 at 10:45 am
Raytheraym PLATINUM, Belton, Missouri
47 articles 35 photos 457 comments
Great job! It's very well written.

on Jun. 3 2011 at 8:46 pm
HaleyDRog. GOLD, Easley, South Carolina
11 articles 14 photos 291 comments

Favorite Quote:
In three words I can sum up everything I've learned about life. It goes on. -Robert Frost

Thank you!

on Jun. 3 2011 at 8:11 pm
redhairCat PLATINUM, Pebble Beach, California
47 articles 20 photos 411 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I can do anything!"

Really powerful! Wow.