The Story of a Lost Soul

April 27, 2011
By zoid123 GOLD, Charlotte, Vermont
zoid123 GOLD, Charlotte, Vermont
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Favorite Quote:
Trying to be someone your not is a waste of the person you currently are.


Staring out into the dark night,
Wondering what ever went wrong,
My world has gone down the drain,
I am not sure what I am going to do,
Yesterday we where madly in love,
Now I am one lost soul,
Next to a soul, who doesn’t care,
He said he loved me,
And then he said he didn’t,
I am so confused.
I feel so betrayed,
I want all this pain to end,
What am I supposed to do,
When the one person,
Who could stop me from crying,
Is the one that is causing.
My tears to be as natural as rain.
I used to walk in an empty lonely world,
With no one to love and hold me,
With no one to make me feel safe,
But the day I met him,
Made me feel safe all the time,
But now that he has left me,
My soul feels like it has no meaning,
I want to feels safe again,
Will I ever meet another guy,
A guy that makes me feel like he did.
I thought I loved him.
I thought we were meant to be,
But like always,
In the end I find I am wrong,
And in the end,
My life begins,
With the story of a lost soul.


The author's comments:
I wrote this poem a little while after who I thought was the love of my life suddenly broke up with me.

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elizamc83 GOLD said...
on May. 3 2012 at 6:22 pm
elizamc83 GOLD, Concord, Massachusetts
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Favorite Quote:
"From now on, I don't care if my tea leaves spell 'Die, Ron, die,' I'm chucking them in the bin where they belong." -Ron Weasley

nice job :) its very descriptive and emotional

zoid123 GOLD said...
on Jun. 1 2011 at 12:19 pm
zoid123 GOLD, Charlotte, Vermont
15 articles 0 photos 18 comments

Favorite Quote:
Trying to be someone your not is a waste of the person you currently are.

Thancks for the comment

StarGazer93 said...
on May. 31 2011 at 2:37 pm

Just a clip of lyrics from the song Full Moon by Sonata Arctica.

Sitting on a corner all alone,
staring from the bottom of his soul,
watching the night come in from the window

It'll all collapse tonight, the fullmoon is here again
In sickness and in health, understanding so demanding
It has no name, there's one for every season
Makes him insane to know

Running away from it all
"I'll be safe in the cornfields", he
thinks Hunted by his own,
again he feels the moon rising on the sky

Find a barn which to sleep in, but can't he hide anymore
Someones at the door, understanding too demanding
Can this be wrong, it's love that is not ending
Makes him insane to know.



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