A Life Worth Living

March 21, 2011
I’m Lying alone pondering,
Asking, “Is life really worth living?”
“Would it be a foolish attempt to carry-on,
Knowing not of the essence of my being, Never to know the true feeling of love?”

Would this be worthwhile,
Worth enduring life alone,
Secluded from this wretched world.

Could this be who I am,
A shadow in this dark abyss called life?
Is this the life that I am forever bound too?

Would it be possible that everything
I am feeling is a vulgar manifestation
Of what I portray as my life?

Or could it be that my mind is copping
With recent loss of my will to care?
Am I just a young man longing for love,
Longing for a companion?


But who am I kidding?
It’s just the temptation of false hope,
Reaping havoc on my fragile heart;
Only foolish dreams for the brokenhearted.

Hope is only for the faint of heart;
For those who have lost the will to live,
In retrospect the will to carry-on.





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shays said...
Jun. 18, 2011 at 12:18 pm
Absolutely beautiful!!! there are no other words to describe it. ppl often worder this but u were able to write it down n help ppl see wat u see! sum1 may need this one day n this will help them! gud work! keep writing!
 
poetofdarkness replied...
Jun. 18, 2011 at 8:50 pm
thanks a million i really owe you one
 
shays replied...
Jun. 19, 2011 at 11:18 am
no problem!!
 
IDKXmere13 said...
Jun. 18, 2011 at 11:05 am
This is really good! it made me cry alittle though it's a really strong poem! :)
 
poetofdarkness replied...
Jun. 18, 2011 at 8:56 pm
its ment to strike that form of emotion and showing the reader the thoughts of a young man contiplating the importance of his life
 
IDKXmere13 said...
Jun. 18, 2011 at 11:04 am
This is really good it kinda made me cry alittle. it's really stong
 
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