Taste of Negativity

April 10, 2011
By Brewhit SILVER, Tamaroa, Illinois
Brewhit SILVER, Tamaroa, Illinois
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How does negativity taste?
Because you feed on it.
I can see you dissolving,
from the acid in their words.
You're blinded by lies,
trapped in the obscurity.
When I offer my hand
I'm immersed in the wrong.
One more victim of circumstance.
How does negativity taste?

The author's comments:
I wrote this to help people realize that negativity can spread like wildfire. I can be in the best mood, and one negative comment can bring me down the rest of the day. I know other teenagers can relate to this because high school is a feeding ground for negative bacteria.

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This article has 3 comments.

Brewhit SILVER said...
on Jun. 3 2011 at 11:58 pm
Brewhit SILVER, Tamaroa, Illinois
9 articles 0 photos 8 comments
Thank you. I'm glad you enjoyed it.

Dollyde said...
on May. 31 2011 at 4:48 am
Dollyde, Brighton, Other
0 articles 0 photos 1 comment
I enjoyed this because i can feel you have experienced what your writing about. You have portrayed the emotions well.

on May. 27 2011 at 7:38 pm
rondarox BRONZE, Eugene, Oregon
3 articles 1 photo 2 comments

Favorite Quote:
'I don't know how to put this, But I'm kind of a big deal' Ron Burgundy- Anchorman

'Bears, Beats, Battlestar Galactica' The Office

Very true. Awesome job, Short and to the point.



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