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Taste of Negativity

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How does negativity taste?
Because you feed on it.
I can see you dissolving,
from the acid in their words.
You're blinded by lies,
trapped in the obscurity.
When I offer my hand
I'm immersed in the wrong.
One more victim of circumstance.
How does negativity taste?




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Dollyde said...
May 31, 2011 at 4:48 am:
I enjoyed this because i can feel you have experienced what your writing about. You have portrayed the emotions well.
 
Brewhit replied...
Jun. 3, 2011 at 11:58 pm :
Thank you. I'm glad you enjoyed it.
 
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rondarox said...
May 27, 2011 at 7:38 pm:

Very true. Awesome job, Short and to the point.

 

 
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