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Its hard writing a poem for me
Inspiration doesn't come easily
The words don't write themselves
Its up to me
A poem can make you laugh
or cry
or make you sad
For some, they can write poems in a second
Though for me
it takes more
Inspiration isn't next to me right now
So I apologize for wasting your time
But its hard to write a poem
As you can see
Maybe not for you but for me
Again, I am sorry for wasting your time
I apologize




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shadowriderThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Sept. 4, 2011 at 6:29 pm:

I saw someone use this method of feedback so I'll  try it. It's called Stars and Wishes. Stars being good things, and Wishes being things that I wish you hadn't done/changed/etc. :) Then I'll leave a summary at the end.

 

Stars: This was entertaining and funny. I like light hearted poetry sometimes, and this was very enjoyable. You rhyme so well it seems effortless. The line breaks were placed well in order to create a wonderful flow to this piece. The message was fun ... (more »)

 
Iamonlyhuman replied...
Sept. 24, 2011 at 6:17 pm :
Oh thank you. I'll keep your wishes in my thoughts when I write again.
 
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