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I would say sorry MAG

May 25, 2011
By plmemaster BRONZE, Westminster, Colorado
plmemaster BRONZE, Westminster, Colorado
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I would say sorry
but I am so tired of lying,
and i am not much of anything.
But i know,
what i feel
and when I feel them.

flopping babies and
howling foxes
at least they’re making noise.

pots and pans are getting thrown
hands are slapping walls
i hear everyone yelling but you.

and hell, i wish so bad you would
fling yourself in the air, parade my medium
violate my confidence
i’m about to give this one more chance.
are you willing to show me
that you can try?


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on Jun. 2 2011 at 12:07 pm
thezebrasgray PLATINUM, Taylorsville, Utah
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its so beautiful! you did a really good job

on May. 31 2011 at 10:47 am
TrixyDev BRONZE, Washington DC, District Of Columbia
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Favorite Quote:
There we were. All alone. Floating in space. And we realized life is just a dream, and heaven is whats real.
- me
Many more tho

I really like the first bit. Very nice poem :)

on May. 26 2011 at 11:18 pm
Atlantis PLATINUM, Naylor, Georgia
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Favorite Quote:
Because we are all looking for the complete definition of love (Beau Sia)

By far, my favorite poem ever written.

on May. 26 2011 at 3:42 pm
jenniferdesires BRONZE, Philadelphia, Pennsylvania
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This poem is  beautiful

on May. 25 2011 at 2:39 pm
flyinggemini GOLD, Wayne, Pennsylvania
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That's amazing.  The imagery is fantastic.  'Flopping babies and/ howling foxes/ at least they're making noise.'  That's my favorite.