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Being challenged

April 21, 2011
By pa tuan BRONZE, Lewisville, Texas
pa tuan BRONZE, Lewisville, Texas
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While I went to play with my friends,
I saw a rose like I had ever see in my life.
The rose was so beautiful and I couldn’t take my eyes off it.
I stared for five minutes and fell in love with the rose like Romeo and Juliet.
Whenever I went out, I saw that rose shining like a sun or the moon or the stars.
I dream about the rose every single night and
thought about that rose every second and didn’t know what to do.
I couldn’t help to be like a man, because I fall for the rose.
One day I went to get that rose, but I couldn’t reach it,
so I stood straight and reached farther for the rose.
Before I could reach that rose the thorn sliced my fingers and
the blood was flowing like rain, but I didn’t want to give up.
I tried to get that rose every single day.
Years passed by I still couldn’t get that rose.
My heart was breaking in pieces.
One day I decided to die if I couldn’t get that rose.
When I got there I didn’t have to reach it by myself.
The rose tree bent like an old man.
I caressed that rose and the rose locked me in her heart and
threw away the key to where people cannot find,
but I still looking for the key, because that was all about “Young love”.


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