Put the past away

April 5, 2011
By Mr.Indescribable SILVER, Cerro Gordo, North Carolina
Mr.Indescribable SILVER, Cerro Gordo, North Carolina
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Favorite Quote:
Hard work beats talent when talent doesnt work hard-Kevin Durant
Pressure Makes Diamonds-Kendall Marshall
Jumping to conclusions just makes the fall a lot harder-Me


Your fighting a war inside yourself
Your confused mind feels like a jail
Theres a shroud upon your soul
While you fight it takes control

You look for the light at the end of the tunnel
But your mind is like a large funnel
You took to much in, so now it's clogged
As your running through the endless fog

The past is gone, locked away and guarded
But the future, it can be parted
So live your life with a new meaning
Or you'll never begin healing


The author's comments:
I wrote this one about myself a little. I really like this one.

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on Jun. 16 2012 at 9:20 pm
Ms.PeytonLovesHP GOLD, Rancho Cordova, California
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Favorite Quote:
“We are all a little weird and life is a little weird, and when we find someone whose weirdness is compatible with ours, we join up with them and fall in mutual weirdness and call it love.” - Doctor Seuss

LOOOVEEEE IT!! cannot express how well u write!!!! u humble my mediopkre writing

 


on Nov. 25 2011 at 7:45 pm
RaveFire PLATINUM, Vancouver, Washington
32 articles 1 photo 218 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Sometimes You Have To Give Up Your Life To Save It." ~some book that i don't remember the name of

"Live Life Like There's No Yesterday" ~ random billboard

"If No One Can Hurt You, Then Nobody Loves You" ` ~ Kerli?

this poem is really good but dont limit yourself to rhymes.

on Nov. 24 2011 at 9:07 pm
HeatherBee BRONZE, I Live In, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
Go on and try to tear me down. I will be rising from the ground, like a skyscraper

Love is louder than the pressure to be perfect

yeah keep up the good poems! theyre beautiful

on Oct. 29 2011 at 1:53 pm
Poetic_License GOLD, Hendersonville, North Carolina
12 articles 7 photos 2 comments

Favorite Quote:
I am a raven. I am a crow. I am a nappy bat. I am a mosquito. Call me anything black that has wings and flies.
~Glenis Redmond

I loved the last stanza. It really hit home. Nice job!

on Sep. 14 2011 at 10:58 pm
Brooklea SILVER, Granite Falls, Minnesota
7 articles 7 photos 5 comments

Favorite Quote:
"let go of what kills you & hold on to what keeps you breathing"

i like this one:] keep up the good work!

on Aug. 30 2011 at 6:54 pm
TheatreGeek BRONZE, Neenah, Wisconsin
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Favorite Quote:
"Enjoy life, embrace love, and listen to your heart"-Dalton Zanin

I really enjoyed this poem. I appreciate how it discusses the struggles we have within ourselves (which happens to me a lot) could you check my poems out? I'd love the feedback

on Aug. 24 2011 at 2:22 pm
Mr.Indescribable SILVER, Cerro Gordo, North Carolina
6 articles 0 photos 42 comments

Favorite Quote:
Hard work beats talent when talent doesnt work hard-Kevin Durant
Pressure Makes Diamonds-Kendall Marshall
Jumping to conclusions just makes the fall a lot harder-Me

Thanks. sure i will

Amezyarak said...
on Aug. 24 2011 at 1:06 pm
Nice, your work is really good! care to check mine out?

on Aug. 24 2011 at 11:34 am
Mr.Indescribable SILVER, Cerro Gordo, North Carolina
6 articles 0 photos 42 comments

Favorite Quote:
Hard work beats talent when talent doesnt work hard-Kevin Durant
Pressure Makes Diamonds-Kendall Marshall
Jumping to conclusions just makes the fall a lot harder-Me

Yea. You pretty much summed it up perfectly. Im happy you enjoyed it. Thanks for reading.

on Aug. 23 2011 at 12:17 pm
Fitzgerald96 GOLD, Folsom, California
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Favorite Quote:
“Writers aren't exactly people...they're a whole lot of people trying to be one person.”
F. Scott Fitzgerald quote

I really enjoyed this. Was your ultimate point that the past is the past and the future can be different but if you want to change you must make changes?


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