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Endless asphalt,
limitless possibilities,
all represented by a door,
if the future is set in stone,
then stone changes,
take a chance,
don't rush,
one door means seven more,
not to be exact,
admire the tulips,
enjoy the aurora borealis,
weigh the fruit,
weigh the salt,
guts don't lie!





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ArrowHeart said...
Sept. 9, 2011 at 6:38 pm
I am sorry I needed to compare my !st Story to Yours. You are the best young writer ever!
 
JoPepper replied...
Sept. 10, 2011 at 9:29 am
Thank you so much you're also really good, I'm sorry if I was too critical when I commented on your stuff!!! :/ :)
 
ArrowHeart replied...
Sept. 10, 2011 at 5:26 pm

No, you were perfect!!! I am trying to be better to the readers.

 

 
-DreamForever- said...
Jun. 5, 2011 at 2:51 pm
I love the message this portrays.  "Live life to it's fullest" "follow your dreams" "never give up." There are so many things people could get from reading this.  Great work!
 
JoPepper replied...
Jun. 6, 2011 at 10:01 am
Thanks for reading and commenting! I'm glad you liked it!!!! :))
 
FlipSwitchFast said...
May 30, 2011 at 10:13 pm
I agree dreams should be followed. The lines, " one door means seven more, not to be exact" is awesome! Because life is not exact. I liked the positive feeling in this poem. The only thing I would change is to say an endless dirt road instead of asphalt because it paints a prettier picture in my mind. But that's just me!
 
JoPepper replied...
May 31, 2011 at 12:01 pm
Okay, thank you I wrote it after I was driving non-stop for 5 days about 15 hours a day.Yuck :P!  Thank you for the feedback! :D
 
JoPepper replied...
May 31, 2011 at 1:31 pm
(So when I thought of a road I thought of asphalt, Guess my brain was suddenly hardwired to think asphalt when ever someone said road!" :)
 
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