The Forgotten

April 17, 2011
By Dreamer21 PLATINUM, Hockessin, Delaware
Dreamer21 PLATINUM, Hockessin, Delaware
29 articles 12 photos 16 comments

Favorite Quote:
To the world you might be one person, but to one person you might be the world.


Dreams are lined up against the wall
In this dark and dismal hall.
There is no hope for them here,
In a place that's full of fear.
They may cry and they can plead
But still they continue to bleed.
I listen to the many sounds,
As I make my daily rounds,
Of those that suffer under my gaze
Of those that had been dead for days.
You can never forget the screams
Of the lonely forgotten dreams,
That always hang here against the wall
In this dark and dismal hall.

The author's comments:
Oh so depressing
I wrote this with the extra time that I had in Psychology
I like it a lot and thought that I should share it xD

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on May. 23 2011 at 2:35 pm
mariemoonlight GOLD, Chicago, Illinois
16 articles 3 photos 7 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Balance is key to living a good life. Too much 'reality' will make you angry, too much dreaming will make you indifferent. You need dreams to live better and life to accomplish dreams =]" - Ms.Nada (my spanish teacher)

I really liked this. I felt like I was in that dark and dismal hall. This is definetly one of my favorites.  

on May. 23 2011 at 2:07 pm
babygirl123495 BRONZE, Eau Calire, Wisconsin
4 articles 0 photos 8 comments

Favorite Quote:
you dont see the turn you just see the road ahead

this poem is really good i love it.

it is one of my favorites.


on May. 21 2011 at 10:14 pm
MayhemMadness, Lakeland, Florida
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Favorite Quote:
" Your not ready to live, If your not ready to die."

OhMyGoodness this is astounding, amazing, impecable, .. AWESOMENESS!! 5 stars! This is one of my new favorites!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

AlidaHope said...
on May. 21 2011 at 6:58 pm
AlidaHope, Ft Worth, Texas
0 articles 0 photos 2 comments

Favorite Quote:
"You Either Die a Hero, or Live Long Enough to See Yourself Become a Villain"-Harvy Dent from Christopher Nolan's "The Dark Knight".

I agree. I thought it had a lot of emotion. I love that you can do that in your writing.

on May. 21 2011 at 4:33 pm
Dedegirl PLATINUM, Williamsburg, Virginia
21 articles 0 photos 7 comments

Favorite Quote:
"plain & simple, black & white"

Love the emotion :)
Keep it up.

on May. 20 2011 at 11:10 pm
Annabel_lee SILVER, Sugar Hill, Georgia
7 articles 5 photos 9 comments

Favorite Quote:
The fifth verse of 'Annabel lee' be Edgar Allen poe: and we love that was greater than love of those who were older than we, of many far wiser than we,but neither the angels in heaven above nor the Desmond under the sea, can ever dissever my soul.....

I love it. I enjoy the intensity of the vernacular choices, and the ending repetition. All around amazing.

nnc97 said...
on May. 20 2011 at 9:34 pm
That was awesome...very deep...with a lot of meaning




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