my sister

April 13, 2011
By carothesparrow GOLD, Lilburn, Georgia
carothesparrow GOLD, Lilburn, Georgia
15 articles 9 photos 249 comments

Favorite Quote:
dont give up she will talk someday my friend made this quote she is really cool cause she understands about my sister
it starts with ONE to make a differerence!!! i learned this quote at a leadership camp

ohana means family no one gets left behind


my sister is really cool
Even thought she can't talk that does not mean she has nothing to say
she always makes me feel happy
some people don't understand how she is different then the rest of us
i really care about her
it makes me sad when people say mean things about her
i am so thankful my friends care about her because of who she is


The author's comments:
my sister inspired me because she cant talk at all. she cant talk cause she has a disability. most people at my school just don't understand that it hurts when you make fun of people who are like my sister

Similar Articles

JOIN THE DISCUSSION

This article has 18 comments.


on Jul. 30 2012 at 1:28 pm
carothesparrow GOLD, Lilburn, Georgia
15 articles 9 photos 249 comments

Favorite Quote:
dont give up she will talk someday my friend made this quote she is really cool cause she understands about my sister
it starts with ONE to make a differerence!!! i learned this quote at a leadership camp

ohana means family no one gets left behind

thanks im glad u like it

Honour SILVER said...
on Jul. 30 2012 at 1:25 pm
Honour SILVER, New London, Connecticut
9 articles 0 photos 181 comments

Favorite Quote:
Greater love has no man than this, that a man lay down his life for his friends. ~John 15:13

"Give me liberty or give me death!" ~Patrick Henry

Be brave and steadfast; have no fear or dread of them, for it is the Lord, your God, who marches with you; he will never fail you or forsake you. ~ Deuteronomy 31:6

"I prefer dangerous freedom over peaceful slavery" ~ Thomas Jefferson

This is great!! :D One of my sister's has FAS (Fetal Alcohol Syndrome) She was adopted from Russia, and she's so sweet, but she has to go to a special school for her disabilities.  I wouldn't want people to make fun of her.

Honour SILVER said...
on Jul. 30 2012 at 1:25 pm
Honour SILVER, New London, Connecticut
9 articles 0 photos 181 comments

Favorite Quote:
Greater love has no man than this, that a man lay down his life for his friends. ~John 15:13

"Give me liberty or give me death!" ~Patrick Henry

Be brave and steadfast; have no fear or dread of them, for it is the Lord, your God, who marches with you; he will never fail you or forsake you. ~ Deuteronomy 31:6

"I prefer dangerous freedom over peaceful slavery" ~ Thomas Jefferson

This is great!! :D One of my sister's has FAS (Fetal Alcohol Syndrome) She was adopted from Russia, and she's so sweet, but she has to go to a special school for her disabilities.  I wouldn't want people to make fun of her.

Phoenix. said...
on Jan. 27 2012 at 4:54 pm
Phoenix., Pittsfield, Pennsylvania
0 articles 0 photos 93 comments
this is great and packed with emotion!

on Dec. 31 2011 at 4:49 pm
yazigirl BRONZE, Athens, Texas
1 article 0 photos 23 comments

Favorite Quote:
"people say hell is endless. i say hell is empty and all the demons are here"- one tree hill

aww sweet! makes me miss my sis

on Dec. 28 2011 at 7:56 pm
carothesparrow GOLD, Lilburn, Georgia
15 articles 9 photos 249 comments

Favorite Quote:
dont give up she will talk someday my friend made this quote she is really cool cause she understands about my sister
it starts with ONE to make a differerence!!! i learned this quote at a leadership camp

ohana means family no one gets left behind

thanks that means a lot

byebye said...
on Dec. 28 2011 at 7:55 pm
byebye, Nevermore, Other
0 articles 0 photos 253 comments
I loved this poem and I love how you care so much about your sister. It shows in your writing. This line: "Even though she can't talk that does not mean she has nothing to say" ...is brilliant! Maybe talk a bit more about that. Very good! :)

on Dec. 13 2011 at 12:02 pm
carothesparrow GOLD, Lilburn, Georgia
15 articles 9 photos 249 comments

Favorite Quote:
dont give up she will talk someday my friend made this quote she is really cool cause she understands about my sister
it starts with ONE to make a differerence!!! i learned this quote at a leadership camp

ohana means family no one gets left behind

thank u :)

pinkowl BRONZE said...
on Dec. 12 2011 at 7:29 pm
pinkowl BRONZE, Tyrone, Pennsylvania
3 articles 0 photos 110 comments

Favorite Quote:
Jeremiah 29:11

i love the passion in this! <3

on Dec. 11 2011 at 12:28 pm
carothesparrow GOLD, Lilburn, Georgia
15 articles 9 photos 249 comments

Favorite Quote:
dont give up she will talk someday my friend made this quote she is really cool cause she understands about my sister
it starts with ONE to make a differerence!!! i learned this quote at a leadership camp

ohana means family no one gets left behind

thanks everyone 

on Dec. 11 2011 at 12:26 pm
Wonderment DIAMOND, Scranton, Pennsylvania
75 articles 0 photos 142 comments
Rainbow this is so sweet. Its so nice as well. You can see that you really care about your sister. I bet this poem makes her happy.  Overall, I like.

on Dec. 11 2011 at 12:25 pm
Bella.Electra PLATINUM, Phoenix, Arizona
23 articles 2 photos 6 comments
cute poem! very inspiring message:)

on Nov. 30 2011 at 7:44 pm
carothesparrow GOLD, Lilburn, Georgia
15 articles 9 photos 249 comments

Favorite Quote:
dont give up she will talk someday my friend made this quote she is really cool cause she understands about my sister
it starts with ONE to make a differerence!!! i learned this quote at a leadership camp

ohana means family no one gets left behind

thanks

on Nov. 30 2011 at 7:43 pm
Come-n-Gone GOLD, Unionville, Missouri
10 articles 0 photos 41 comments

Favorite Quote:
Isn't it funny how it only takes a few seconds to say hi, but forever to say goodbye?

your sister is lucky to have someone like you

 


on Nov. 28 2011 at 5:26 pm
carothesparrow GOLD, Lilburn, Georgia
15 articles 9 photos 249 comments

Favorite Quote:
dont give up she will talk someday my friend made this quote she is really cool cause she understands about my sister
it starts with ONE to make a differerence!!! i learned this quote at a leadership camp

ohana means family no one gets left behind

thanks 

on Nov. 28 2011 at 5:19 pm
musicluver SILVER, Indio, California
9 articles 2 photos 12 comments

Favorite Quote:
don't let people bring you down.

Rea;;y sweet

on Jun. 12 2011 at 3:23 pm
carothesparrow GOLD, Lilburn, Georgia
15 articles 9 photos 249 comments

Favorite Quote:
dont give up she will talk someday my friend made this quote she is really cool cause she understands about my sister
it starts with ONE to make a differerence!!! i learned this quote at a leadership camp

ohana means family no one gets left behind

thanks for the feedback :)

on Jun. 12 2011 at 1:36 pm
Raytheraym PLATINUM, Belton, Missouri
47 articles 35 photos 460 comments
Aww, how sweet. Good job! In line 2 though, "thought" should be "though".


Parkland Book