April 20, 2011
Oh beauty.
A word used loosely.
Is it just a façade?
Or the innerself?
All in accordance to the eye

Can the eye see deep within?
Or shall the vision be blurred?

Will one look past to see the beauty of both worlds?

Judgments all based on vision
And the unfortunate are blind
Oh the eye can be powerful
Alter one’s life
Alter the vision

Don’t judge
For eyes wear out with time
As does the façade

Clear a mind
A thought
And open eyes
The unweary eyes
And see the true beauty deep inside
For a clear judgment

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rickrossy123 said...
May 30, 2011 at 9:43 pm
it was kind of good but its a little too deep for a teenager.... teen poems are supposed happy and fun not about unhappiness and hate.  Really sad, makes me want to eat myself to death.
kcorban replied...
Jun. 26, 2011 at 2:16 pm
Thank you for your comment, but as a teenager, I've learned many things about people my age. No teenager is happy. Teenagers always find something to complain about, and sometimes, they have a right to. Life isn't easy. This is actually one of my happiest poems :P But I appreciate your comment.
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