Moving On

May 13, 2011
By Amberrrr BRONZE, Lawrence, Kansas
Amberrrr BRONZE, Lawrence, Kansas
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Favorite Quote:
"I believe that everything happens for a reason. People change so that you can learn to let go, things go wrong so that you appreciate them when they're right, you believe lies so you eventually learn to trust no one but yourself, and sometimes goo


The mocking bird
Just won’t go away
Why can’t it be easy
Just fly away
Stop replaying memories
Get off my shoulder
I want to move on
But it’s there like a boulder
Always reminding me,
Of what I had
Good or bad
I don’t want the bird
But something brings it back
Some memories fade,
Others stand strong
Maybe it’s a sign,
Maybe I was wrong
Why can’t this bird just go away,
Come again another day



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on May. 20 2011 at 9:57 pm
Jessi-ca SILVER, Arvada, Colorado
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Favorite Quote:
It would be easy to say that the pants changed everything that summer. But looking back now I feel like our lives changed because they had to, and that the real magic of the pants was in bearing witness to all of this and in somehow holding us to get.

thanks i hope to see some from you soon

 


on May. 20 2011 at 4:56 pm
VampryaShadow SILVER, St. Louis, Missouri
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Favorite Quote:
Life Goes On

I actually recently went through a breakup and I feel the same way. It's so hard to get rid of those thoughts because whatever you do something reminds you of something that happened during that time.

on May. 20 2011 at 11:46 am
Dragonrenji BRONZE, St.louis, Missouri
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Wow I really like this poem. I know the feeling that you trying to show... Nice job. 

on May. 20 2011 at 8:13 am
kaykay101 PLATINUM, Arundel, Maine
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this is fantastic! i love the way this sounds! it's really relatable. nice job!

on May. 19 2011 at 9:30 pm
VanityKills PLATINUM, Lake Elsinore, California
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Favorite Quote:
"But beauty, real beauty is a mode of exaggeration, and can destroy the harmony of any face"-Oscar Wilde.

I *HATE* breakups. I love this poem, Makes me feel like I'm not alone.

on May. 19 2011 at 8:05 pm
LookingForward1 BRONZE, Cincinnati, Ohio
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Favorite Quote:
"All you need is yourself to guide the way, other people just get in the way, your better off alone."

aggggggggrreed. looking forward to more from you(:

on May. 19 2011 at 2:03 pm
Jessi-ca SILVER, Arvada, Colorado
7 articles 1 photo 8 comments

Favorite Quote:
It would be easy to say that the pants changed everything that summer. But looking back now I feel like our lives changed because they had to, and that the real magic of the pants was in bearing witness to all of this and in somehow holding us to get.

this is great i love it and i can so relate to this poem

on May. 18 2011 at 9:07 pm
llothamer16 BRONZE, Olathe, Kansas
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Beautiful!

on May. 18 2011 at 8:50 pm
Sofiya Zhura BRONZE, Mississauga, Other
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 enjoy the fact that you wrote "the mocking bird wont go away" because truly a hard break up stays with you and mocks you and you wish it would just go away 

on May. 18 2011 at 7:22 pm
taterbug235 SILVER, Flora, Indiana
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Favorite Quote:
Never underestimate the impossible.

i love this poem. break ups are hard. you nailed it. good job!

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on May. 18 2011 at 11:39 am
Jordan. BRONZE, Woodburn, Oregon
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Favorite Quote:
"If someone hurts you, Cry a river build a bridge, and get over it"
"Ohana Means family"

I really like this poem, i can relate to it. I hate when bad memories come back into my life... Keep up the good work.!


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