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The mocking bird
Just won’t go away
Why can’t it be easy
Just fly away
Stop replaying memories
Get off my shoulder
I want to move on
But it’s there like a boulder
Always reminding me,
Of what I had
Good or bad
I don’t want the bird
But something brings it back
Some memories fade,
Others stand strong
Maybe it’s a sign,
Maybe I was wrong
Why can’t this bird just go away,
Come again another day




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VampryaShadow said...
May 20, 2011 at 4:56 pm:
I actually recently went through a breakup and I feel the same way. It's so hard to get rid of those thoughts because whatever you do something reminds you of something that happened during that time.
 
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Dragonrenji said...
May 20, 2011 at 11:46 am:
Wow I really like this poem. I know the feeling that you trying to show... Nice job. 
 
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kaykay101 said...
May 20, 2011 at 8:13 am:
this is fantastic! i love the way this sounds! it's really relatable. nice job!
 
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VanityKills said...
May 19, 2011 at 9:30 pm:
I *HATE* breakups. I love this poem, Makes me feel like I'm not alone.
 
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Jessi-ca said...
May 19, 2011 at 2:03 pm:
this is great i love it and i can so relate to this poem
 
LookingForward1 replied...
May 19, 2011 at 8:05 pm :
aggggggggrreed. looking forward to more from you(:
 
Jessi-ca replied...
May 20, 2011 at 9:57 pm :

thanks i hope to see some from you soon

 

 
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llothamer16 said...
May 18, 2011 at 9:07 pm:
Beautiful!
 
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Sofiya Z. said...
May 18, 2011 at 8:50 pm:
 enjoy the fact that you wrote "the mocking bird wont go away" because truly a hard break up stays with you and mocks you and you wish it would just go away 
 
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poetrywiz35 said...
May 18, 2011 at 7:22 pm:
i love this poem. break ups are hard. you nailed it. good job!
 
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JordanWilks25 said...
May 18, 2011 at 11:39 am:
I really like this poem, i can relate to it. I hate when bad memories come back into my life... Keep up the good work.!
 
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