from scars to stars

April 17, 2011
By no.name. PLATINUM, Ceres, California
no.name. PLATINUM, Ceres, California
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My scars are still scars.
But they will be stars.
I hope sooner. But probably later.
Healing is a process
Laziness won't make progress.
I'm scarred inside. Starry outside.
And only one
can see through the front.
and he turns me from scarry to starry.


The author's comments:
This was written for my friend Brian, he was there for me at a time when I was hurting and going through a rough patch with a mutual best friend. He pulled us both through.

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on Jul. 21 2011 at 8:27 am
no.name. PLATINUM, Ceres, California
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Thank you so much for commenting. I don't always mean for my poetry to be confusing. But the thing is, and I don't mean to sound selfish, I write for myself and not really anyone else. So what I understand is different than what other people do. If that makes sense.

 


on Jun. 13 2011 at 7:54 pm
WickedStarcatcher DIAMOND, Massapequa, New York
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Favorite Quote:
"I don't damsel well. Distress, I can do. Damseling? Not so much."
— James Patterson
"This is the very first page, not where the storyline ends, my thoughts will echo your name until I see you again..." ~Taylor Swift "Enchanted"

OMG! this is beautiful! It was a bit confusing but I think that the confusion emphasized the whole point of the poem <3 I'm glad you had such a great friend to comfort you. I have two best friends when I go through hard times: my friend Cori and poetry :) I like your use of language and your flow alot, too! Wow...hope this isn't too long :)




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