never never land

April 17, 2011
By no.name. PLATINUM, Ceres, California
no.name. PLATINUM, Ceres, California
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where has time gone?
youth is not done.
but adulthood is slowly dawning.

let's live like peter pan.
and find our never never land
to not grow up.

we'll be forever young.
but baby,
i'm dreaming



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on Jul. 21 2011 at 8:25 am
no.name. PLATINUM, Ceres, California
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Thank you for the comment. I agree with the fact that it seemed incomplete. But I didn't quite know what else I could say.

on Jun. 17 2011 at 9:52 am
DanniTwin502 PLATINUM, Wake Forest, North Carolina
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Favorite Quote:
"Everything Happens for a reason."
"The only thing I know, is I don't know anything."
"Would you rather me be honest, or lie?"

I really like this poem(: it sounds a little uncomplete and I think you perfectly described, in a simple way, how even young people realize they're growing up and don't want to. <3 beautiful.


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