An Ordinary Enticer

I can not begin to tell you how much I adore
To stand around at lunchtime and watch you play ball
I love looking in your eyes and gazing at your smile
That makes me want to give you my all
I wish you would hold me in your arms of hot stone
Because when you caress me it feels like I'm at home
You're such a good friend but I am confused
You make me feels special them make me feel bruised
I guess what this means is that we've made it this far
And maybe it's best that things stay as they are





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NinjaGirl This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jun. 19, 2011 at 4:03 pm
This poem has just the right balance of joy and melancholy so that it makes the reader think without being depressing like many other poems. Another good job, DancingInTheRain :)
 
PJD17 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
May 13, 2011 at 10:33 pm
this is really good keep up the great work could you please check out and comment on my poem what if we were a dream i would really appreicat the feedback
 
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