Oh Beautiful Rain

Rain so pure
And innocent,
You make me
Feel alive.
I watch your
Majestic tears
Falling form
The sky,
And I can’t
Suddenly stop
From stripping off
My old worn shoes
And dancing in
Your beauty.
I can feel
The worried looks
From those around,
But all
I want is
To feel your soft
Caresses
As you,
Oh beautiful
Rain, poor down.





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SmileyFace13 said...
May 14, 2011 at 4:46 pm
Like the two poeple who commented before me were soooo right. This flows so soomthly and i love the way you ended it. Beautiful written:)
 
SmileyFace13 replied...
May 14, 2011 at 4:47 pm
i meant smoothly not soomthly
 
Express-- This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
May 14, 2011 at 11:02 am
Very well. I even think you should add to it a litle, becasuse I agree with sorlageal, it has a great flow;
 
sorlageal This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
May 13, 2011 at 11:30 pm
wonderfully worded! It flows, so well.
 
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