Mr. Valentine

April 18, 2011
By AlliHolmes BRONZE, Jacksonville, Florida
AlliHolmes BRONZE, Jacksonville, Florida
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Favorite Quote:
"What if he's your Prince Charming, but you're not his Cinderella?"

Dear Mr. Valentine
I see you smile for her
I see you laugh and cry
but you don't know that when you're gone
I fall inside and die

Mr. Valentine
These words are mine
I wrote you a letter
hoping I could make
this fate something better

Mr. Valentine
I cried for you last night
I cried but the pain won't quit
I don't know how
to deal with this s***

Mr. Valentine
I can't tell you why
but I love you more each day
if I could change my mind
I would have yesterday

Mr. Valentine
I loved you
and I cannot help it anymore
as you have torn me apart
there's nothing left of me anymore

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This article has 3 comments.

on May. 16 2011 at 7:43 am
dancergurl22 BRONZE, Grand Junction, Michigan
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Favorite Quote:
Love, like you can't get hurt
Dance, like no one's watching
Live, like there's no tomorrow

soooo.... how is "Mr. Valentine"!?!??!?! lol hahhahaha

on May. 15 2011 at 2:33 pm
babymama888 SILVER, Shaker Heights, Ohio
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this is really good! i liked the rhyming-- it always makes a poem better.


on May. 14 2011 at 4:35 pm
FatesMistake13, Springerville, Arizona
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Favorite Quote:
"Most people die of a sort of creeping common sense, and discover when it is too late that the only things one never regrets are one's mistakes." Oscar Wilde

"The books that the world calls immoral are books that show the world its own shame."

I really love it! :) it relaid a lot of emotion and feelings and rolled along smoothly

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