Mr. Valentine

April 18, 2011
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Dear Mr. Valentine
I see you smile for her
I see you laugh and cry
but you don't know that when you're gone
I fall inside and die

Mr. Valentine
These words are mine
I wrote you a letter
hoping I could make
this fate something better

Mr. Valentine
I cried for you last night
I cried but the pain won't quit
I don't know how
to deal with this s***

Mr. Valentine
I can't tell you why
but I love you more each day
if I could change my mind
I would have yesterday

Mr. Valentine
I loved you
and I cannot help it anymore
as you have torn me apart
there's nothing left of me anymore





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dancergurl22 said...
May 16, 2011 at 7:43 am
soooo.... how is "Mr. Valentine"!?!??!?! lol hahhahaha
 
babymama888 said...
May 15, 2011 at 2:33 pm

this is really good! i liked the rhyming-- it always makes a poem better.

 

 
SmileyFace13 said...
May 14, 2011 at 4:35 pm
I really love it! :) it relaid a lot of emotion and feelings and rolled along smoothly
 
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