Your Cuts

April 12, 2011
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I find myself falling,
Giving into gravity,
Being pulled toward the cold hard concrete that is suppose to be below my feet.
I see them all over you,
On your wrist and ankles,
I don’t think I can handle the pressure in my chest any longer.
Your mouth is moving but all I can hear is the thump of my heart growing louder and louder,
You start to fade away,
Out of my mind and eyes,
I finally feel the hard hit of coldness on my skin.

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Dr. McCoy said...
May 16, 2011 at 11:08 am
Really dark in mood, but very effective description of someone's emotions. Nice work.
cheetoz45680 replied...
May 18, 2011 at 5:25 pm
hmm yeah i definately want to stop its not reallly good to do that but dont judge her i hated that when my friends did that
cheetoz45680 said...
May 12, 2011 at 10:34 am
i do it also it helps release my pain. Talk to her. Make sure that she doesnt desire death  but and if she does then help her and do not leave her side. I desired it for a long time but i finally got help and I secretly still cut.
beckaboo32 replied...
May 16, 2011 at 10:27 am
She does it every now and then but has mostly stopped. She doesn't desire death but does it because she says it releses her pain, I will still always be by her side.
Ms. Dunn replied...
May 16, 2011 at 1:22 pm
I think that you did a great job!!!  Please let me know if you or her need someone to talk to.
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