Yellow Days

April 2, 2011
By musicispassion PLATINUM, Perris, California
musicispassion PLATINUM, Perris, California
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Favorite Quote:
" Life is never easy for those who dream."
There are so many other quotes i need pages to write them


On yellow days I feel ecstatic
like a kitten anticipating
the feel of the yarn
between it's paws
on a hot summer day


The author's comments:
It was an assignment in class. We had to write a simile. I thought of my ever day life. I'm always hyper and happy.

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on Aug. 25 2011 at 10:14 pm
musicispassion PLATINUM, Perris, California
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Favorite Quote:
" Life is never easy for those who dream."
There are so many other quotes i need pages to write them

thanks and as a part of the assignment we had to associate it with a season so...

on Aug. 24 2011 at 10:10 pm
snaomi PLATINUM, Cheshire, Connecticut
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I really like this poem a lot.  It's very short but packs a nice punch.  I don't know if the last line is strictly necessary though - ending on the image of the kitten highlights the importance of the simile and gives a great visual

on Jul. 8 2011 at 7:11 pm
musicispassion PLATINUM, Perris, California
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Favorite Quote:
" Life is never easy for those who dream."
There are so many other quotes i need pages to write them

thank u hope u love the cat :P

on Jul. 8 2011 at 1:46 pm
MidnightFire PLATINUM, Lincoln, Illinois
40 articles 6 photos 239 comments

Favorite Quote:
'Dream as if you will live forever, live as if you'll die tomorrow.'
for my sister: 'when life gives me lemons ... i eat them'
'do not be afraid, be faithful'
'God is not safe, but He's good'

My family adopted a stray cat so I definately know how a cat looks when with yarn :) you described it well

on Jul. 3 2011 at 1:39 am
musicispassion PLATINUM, Perris, California
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Favorite Quote:
" Life is never easy for those who dream."
There are so many other quotes i need pages to write them

thank you and i will never stop until i stop breathing

on Jul. 3 2011 at 12:54 am
IAmWhoIWantToBe PLATINUM, Manila, Other
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Favorite Quote:
‎"I’m learning how to drown out the constant noise that is such an inseparable part of my life. I don’t have to prove anything to anyone. I only have to follow my heart and concentrate on what I want to say to the world: I run my world." - Beyoncé

A few words yet powerful poem... :)
Keep writing!

on Jun. 28 2011 at 1:15 am
musicispassion PLATINUM, Perris, California
35 articles 0 photos 735 comments

Favorite Quote:
" Life is never easy for those who dream."
There are so many other quotes i need pages to write them

thanks and thought i'd let u know i'm not one of those crazy cat people i have 2 cats

Finchy BRONZE said...
on Jun. 27 2011 at 11:36 pm
Finchy BRONZE, Fort Myers, Florida
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Musicispassion

After reading both of your day poems, it's become clear that you're a cat person. I like the reoccurring theme that you are using, especially when incorporated into such a perfect simile as this one. I really enjoy reading your poetry; it's short, sweet, and, yet, very deep. 

Cheers

Finchy


on Jun. 27 2011 at 3:00 pm
WritingSpasms, Los Angeles, California
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Favorite Quote:
"Devils run when a good man goes to war."
- River Song from Doctor Who (Ep. A Good Man Goes to War)

I love this one! The image is perfect and wonderfully written. Good job :)

on Jun. 16 2011 at 9:32 pm
CarrieAnn13 GOLD, Goodsoil, Other
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Favorite Quote:
"I love deadlines. I like the whooshing sound they make as they fly by." --Douglas Adams

"The object of life is not to be on the side of the majority, but to escape finding oneself in the ranks of the insane." --Marcus Aurelius

Another great poem! I especially love the kitten simile. :)

on May. 13 2011 at 9:44 pm
musicispassion PLATINUM, Perris, California
35 articles 0 photos 735 comments

Favorite Quote:
" Life is never easy for those who dream."
There are so many other quotes i need pages to write them

thak you so much

iheartu SILVER said...
on May. 13 2011 at 8:31 pm
iheartu SILVER, Nuevo, California
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Favorite Quote:
best friends always leave footprints in your heart forever.
laugh ur heart out
dance in the rain
cherish the moment
ignore the pain
live, laugh, love
forgive&forget
lifes too short to be
living with regrets

hey i love it its awesome

on May. 13 2011 at 12:25 pm
musicispassion PLATINUM, Perris, California
35 articles 0 photos 735 comments

Favorite Quote:
" Life is never easy for those who dream."
There are so many other quotes i need pages to write them

please comment i love to feedback positive or negative

on May. 11 2011 at 6:25 pm
musicispassion PLATINUM, Perris, California
35 articles 0 photos 735 comments

Favorite Quote:
" Life is never easy for those who dream."
There are so many other quotes i need pages to write them

thank you tell poeple about my poems plz

alex198 said...
on May. 11 2011 at 1:27 pm
alex198, |, Other
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Awww, I love it. Such a perfect image. It's short and simple but it gets across exactly what you're trying to say :) Well done!

on May. 9 2011 at 10:22 pm
musicispassion PLATINUM, Perris, California
35 articles 0 photos 735 comments

Favorite Quote:
" Life is never easy for those who dream."
There are so many other quotes i need pages to write them

anyone plz comment i love to hear feedback


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