Gray Days

April 2, 2011
By musicispassion PLATINUM, Perris, California
musicispassion PLATINUM, Perris, California
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Favorite Quote:
" Life is never easy for those who dream."
There are so many other quotes i need pages to write them


On gray days I am depressed
like a misguided ghost
traveling endlessly to find my
family
on a wet winter day


The author's comments:
It was am assignment a school we had to write a simile poem.I was thinking about the loss of my great grandma when I wrote this.

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on Jul. 17 2011 at 2:48 pm
musicispassion PLATINUM, Perris, California
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Favorite Quote:
" Life is never easy for those who dream."
There are so many other quotes i need pages to write them

thanks i appreciate it

on Jul. 17 2011 at 12:31 pm
TheSilverLaurel GOLD, Goole, Other
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it simple, and probably not the first similie i would think of, but it works. 5 stars.

on Jul. 8 2011 at 2:11 pm
MidnightFire PLATINUM, Lincoln, Illinois
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Favorite Quote:
'Dream as if you will live forever, live as if you'll die tomorrow.'
for my sister: 'when life gives me lemons ... i eat them'
'do not be afraid, be faithful'
'God is not safe, but He's good'

no, i don't think i have

on Jul. 8 2011 at 12:23 pm
musicispassion PLATINUM, Perris, California
35 articles 0 photos 735 comments

Favorite Quote:
" Life is never easy for those who dream."
There are so many other quotes i need pages to write them

i kinds see it has that little girl with the matches have u ever read that story

on Jul. 8 2011 at 11:06 am
MidnightFire PLATINUM, Lincoln, Illinois
40 articles 6 photos 239 comments

Favorite Quote:
'Dream as if you will live forever, live as if you'll die tomorrow.'
for my sister: 'when life gives me lemons ... i eat them'
'do not be afraid, be faithful'
'God is not safe, but He's good'

I can definately picture this ... I'm a very visual person when it comes to reading and writing ... i see a faint outline of an old hobo like man (dont worry thats not you, it's just what i see when i think ghost and winter) trudging threw snow unable to see a few feet infront of him as a cold snowfilled blast of wind hit him.

on Jul. 3 2011 at 1:38 am
musicispassion PLATINUM, Perris, California
35 articles 0 photos 735 comments

Favorite Quote:
" Life is never easy for those who dream."
There are so many other quotes i need pages to write them

thank you i'll look at some of your stuff

on Jul. 3 2011 at 12:55 am
IAmWhoIWantToBe PLATINUM, Manila, Other
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Favorite Quote:
‎"I’m learning how to drown out the constant noise that is such an inseparable part of my life. I don’t have to prove anything to anyone. I only have to follow my heart and concentrate on what I want to say to the world: I run my world." - Beyoncé

Indeed, another good poem of yours. I like your "Yellow Days."

on Jun. 28 2011 at 1:11 am
musicispassion PLATINUM, Perris, California
35 articles 0 photos 735 comments

Favorite Quote:
" Life is never easy for those who dream."
There are so many other quotes i need pages to write them

i know but apart of the assignment was we had to put a place that went with the emotion and color

on Jun. 16 2011 at 9:29 pm
CarrieAnn13 GOLD, Goodsoil, Other
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Favorite Quote:
"I love deadlines. I like the whooshing sound they make as they fly by." --Douglas Adams

"The object of life is not to be on the side of the majority, but to escape finding oneself in the ranks of the insane." --Marcus Aurelius

My only criticism for this poem is that the last line 'on a wet winter day' seems out of place. The simile with the ghost is quite sufficient to convey your emotions on a grey day.

on May. 13 2011 at 9:43 pm
musicispassion PLATINUM, Perris, California
35 articles 0 photos 735 comments

Favorite Quote:
" Life is never easy for those who dream."
There are so many other quotes i need pages to write them

sweet thanks

 


iheartu SILVER said...
on May. 13 2011 at 8:58 pm
iheartu SILVER, Nuevo, California
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Favorite Quote:
best friends always leave footprints in your heart forever.
laugh ur heart out
dance in the rain
cherish the moment
ignore the pain
live, laugh, love
forgive&forget
lifes too short to be
living with regrets

LOOOOOOOOOOOVVVVVVEEE IT you are crazy and fun but can have a deep side 

on May. 13 2011 at 12:27 pm
musicispassion PLATINUM, Perris, California
35 articles 0 photos 735 comments

Favorite Quote:
" Life is never easy for those who dream."
There are so many other quotes i need pages to write them

please comment i love to hear feedback positive or negative

on May. 11 2011 at 6:23 pm
musicispassion PLATINUM, Perris, California
35 articles 0 photos 735 comments

Favorite Quote:
" Life is never easy for those who dream."
There are so many other quotes i need pages to write them

thankyou i love hearing feedback especially when it's positive

alex198 said...
on May. 11 2011 at 1:32 pm
alex198, |, Other
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I actually like the shorter pieces. I think they're different and you're capable of creating strong images with so few lines which is a great skill and I'm not sure that would translate as well with a longer poem. I really liked this one too :D

on May. 10 2011 at 11:07 pm
musicispassion PLATINUM, Perris, California
35 articles 0 photos 735 comments

Favorite Quote:
" Life is never easy for those who dream."
There are so many other quotes i need pages to write them

thank you i know i write really short pieces i'm trying to write longer ones

 


on May. 10 2011 at 9:07 am
JadedSoul SILVER, Evans, Georgia
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the thoughts behind your poems are very deep.. But maybe you should write bigger verses ..? Or maybe Culminate them or something.. I love what you're writing.. Just wish you could write more.. Hope that helps :)

on May. 9 2011 at 10:21 pm
musicispassion PLATINUM, Perris, California
35 articles 0 photos 735 comments

Favorite Quote:
" Life is never easy for those who dream."
There are so many other quotes i need pages to write them

anyone plz comment i love to heatr feedback negative or positive

 



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