Red days

On red days I am full of fiery passion
like a determined falcon
swooping to catch it's prey
on a simmering hot day





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MidnightFire said...
Jul. 8, 2011 at 11:01 am
I like the picture that it gives me ... i see the top of the falcon flying over a lake with it's wing covering a tip of the sun's reflection. Then it flies over a patch of pines and dives into a ravine that has a small streaming river at the bottom that lets plants grow and small prey thrive. ... i like that picture :) 
 
musicispassion replied...
Jul. 8, 2011 at 12:34 pm
thanks u have a great image of what this is :P
 
CarrieAnn13 said...
Jun. 16, 2011 at 9:26 pm
Your connection with red and passion was quite accurate. This is another nice, simple poem. Good job!
 
musicispassion replied...
Jun. 28, 2011 at 1:10 am
thank you i don't really make mong poems i think i've made like 2
 
JoPepper said...
Jun. 15, 2011 at 2:40 pm
That was really good I liked it!!!!!!!!!!!! ;))
 
musicispassion replied...
Jun. 15, 2011 at 4:36 pm
tanks so much
 
musicispassion said...
May 9, 2011 at 10:20 pm
anyone plz comment i love to hear feedback
 
musicispassion replied...
May 13, 2011 at 12:27 pm
pleas ecomment i love to hear feedback positive or negative
 
iheartu replied...
May 13, 2011 at 8:55 pm
calm down i love it at least you are such a great poet love ya
 
musicispassion replied...
May 13, 2011 at 9:42 pm
thanks that's nice
 
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