Red days

April 2, 2011
By musicispassion PLATINUM, Perris, California
musicispassion PLATINUM, Perris, California
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Favorite Quote:
" Life is never easy for those who dream."
There are so many other quotes i need pages to write them


On red days I am full of fiery passion
like a determined falcon
swooping to catch it's prey
on a simmering hot day


The author's comments:
This was a class assignment. We were supposed to make a simile that connected colors with emotions.

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on Jul. 8 2011 at 12:34 pm
musicispassion PLATINUM, Perris, California
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Favorite Quote:
" Life is never easy for those who dream."
There are so many other quotes i need pages to write them

thanks u have a great image of what this is :P

on Jul. 8 2011 at 11:01 am
MidnightFire PLATINUM, Lincoln, Illinois
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Favorite Quote:
'Dream as if you will live forever, live as if you'll die tomorrow.'
for my sister: 'when life gives me lemons ... i eat them'
'do not be afraid, be faithful'
'God is not safe, but He's good'

I like the picture that it gives me ... i see the top of the falcon flying over a lake with it's wing covering a tip of the sun's reflection. Then it flies over a patch of pines and dives into a ravine that has a small streaming river at the bottom that lets plants grow and small prey thrive. ... i like that picture :) 

on Jun. 28 2011 at 1:10 am
musicispassion PLATINUM, Perris, California
35 articles 0 photos 735 comments

Favorite Quote:
" Life is never easy for those who dream."
There are so many other quotes i need pages to write them

thank you i don't really make mong poems i think i've made like 2

on Jun. 16 2011 at 9:26 pm
CarrieAnn13 GOLD, Goodsoil, Other
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Favorite Quote:
"I love deadlines. I like the whooshing sound they make as they fly by." --Douglas Adams

"The object of life is not to be on the side of the majority, but to escape finding oneself in the ranks of the insane." --Marcus Aurelius

Your connection with red and passion was quite accurate. This is another nice, simple poem. Good job!

on Jun. 15 2011 at 4:36 pm
musicispassion PLATINUM, Perris, California
35 articles 0 photos 735 comments

Favorite Quote:
" Life is never easy for those who dream."
There are so many other quotes i need pages to write them

tanks so much

on Jun. 15 2011 at 2:40 pm
JoPepper PLATINUM, Annandale, Virginia
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Favorite Quote:
"Freedom is the ability to not care what the other person thinks."

"Not all those who wander are lost" --JRR Tolkien

"When you are listening to music it is better to cover your eyes than your ears." --Jose' Bergamin

That was really good I liked it!!!!!!!!!!!! ;))

on May. 13 2011 at 9:42 pm
musicispassion PLATINUM, Perris, California
35 articles 0 photos 735 comments

Favorite Quote:
" Life is never easy for those who dream."
There are so many other quotes i need pages to write them

thanks that's nice

iheartu SILVER said...
on May. 13 2011 at 8:55 pm
iheartu SILVER, Nuevo, California
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Favorite Quote:
best friends always leave footprints in your heart forever.
laugh ur heart out
dance in the rain
cherish the moment
ignore the pain
live, laugh, love
forgive&forget
lifes too short to be
living with regrets

calm down i love it at least you are such a great poet love ya

on May. 13 2011 at 12:27 pm
musicispassion PLATINUM, Perris, California
35 articles 0 photos 735 comments

Favorite Quote:
" Life is never easy for those who dream."
There are so many other quotes i need pages to write them

pleas ecomment i love to hear feedback positive or negative

on May. 9 2011 at 10:20 pm
musicispassion PLATINUM, Perris, California
35 articles 0 photos 735 comments

Favorite Quote:
" Life is never easy for those who dream."
There are so many other quotes i need pages to write them

anyone plz comment i love to hear feedback


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