Hatred

April 2, 2011
By musicispassion PLATINUM, Perris, California
musicispassion PLATINUM, Perris, California
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Favorite Quote:
" Life is never easy for those who dream."
There are so many other quotes i need pages to write them


That fiery feeling
that burns inside us
like a pot whistling
full of heat
ready to boil over
at any moment.
What is it?


The author's comments:
A book called Cryers Cross inspired me to write this.I was thinking about the book it just sort of happened.

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on Jul. 3 2011 at 3:23 am
musicispassion PLATINUM, Perris, California
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Favorite Quote:
" Life is never easy for those who dream."
There are so many other quotes i need pages to write them

thank you Alon_Freevoice:P

on Jul. 3 2011 at 3:10 am
IAmWhoIWantToBe PLATINUM, Manila, Other
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Favorite Quote:
‎"I’m learning how to drown out the constant noise that is such an inseparable part of my life. I don’t have to prove anything to anyone. I only have to follow my heart and concentrate on what I want to say to the world: I run my world." - Beyoncé

WOAH!
I always say that the person who hates is a loser. Nice job, musicispassion!!

on Jun. 28 2011 at 1:08 am
musicispassion PLATINUM, Perris, California
35 articles 0 photos 735 comments

Favorite Quote:
" Life is never easy for those who dream."
There are so many other quotes i need pages to write them

thank you it means alot to hear someone say they like it

on Jun. 16 2011 at 9:38 pm
CarrieAnn13 GOLD, Goodsoil, Other
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Favorite Quote:
"I love deadlines. I like the whooshing sound they make as they fly by." --Douglas Adams

"The object of life is not to be on the side of the majority, but to escape finding oneself in the ranks of the insane." --Marcus Aurelius

Hatred is a powerful emotion and your poem describes it quite well. Usually, it's just lurking below the surface. Great job!

on Jun. 16 2011 at 11:27 am
JoPepper PLATINUM, Annandale, Virginia
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Favorite Quote:
"Freedom is the ability to not care what the other person thinks."

"Not all those who wander are lost" --JRR Tolkien

"When you are listening to music it is better to cover your eyes than your ears." --Jose' Bergamin

You're very welcome and thank you!

on Jun. 15 2011 at 6:52 pm
musicispassion PLATINUM, Perris, California
35 articles 0 photos 735 comments

Favorite Quote:
" Life is never easy for those who dream."
There are so many other quotes i need pages to write them

it's a rally good book about a posessed desk u should read i don't want to give anything away thanks

on Jun. 15 2011 at 2:36 pm
JoPepper PLATINUM, Annandale, Virginia
35 articles 0 photos 782 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Freedom is the ability to not care what the other person thinks."

"Not all those who wander are lost" --JRR Tolkien

"When you are listening to music it is better to cover your eyes than your ears." --Jose' Bergamin

I thought that was great!!!!!  What's the book Cryers Cross about you mention it alot? Great job!!!!

on May. 13 2011 at 12:29 pm
musicispassion PLATINUM, Perris, California
35 articles 0 photos 735 comments

Favorite Quote:
" Life is never easy for those who dream."
There are so many other quotes i need pages to write them

please  comment i love to hear feedback positive or negative

on May. 11 2011 at 6:18 pm
musicispassion PLATINUM, Perris, California
35 articles 0 photos 735 comments

Favorite Quote:
" Life is never easy for those who dream."
There are so many other quotes i need pages to write them

thanks

 


alex198 said...
on May. 11 2011 at 1:37 pm
alex198, |, Other
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Wow, that is such a great description of a feeling. You portrayed how a person feels when they're angry really well. :)

on May. 9 2011 at 10:23 pm
musicispassion PLATINUM, Perris, California
35 articles 0 photos 735 comments

Favorite Quote:
" Life is never easy for those who dream."
There are so many other quotes i need pages to write them

any one plz comment i love to hear feedback


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