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Hatred

That fiery feeling
that burns inside us
like a pot whistling
full of heat
ready to boil over
at any moment.
What is it?





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Alon_Freevoice said...
Jul. 3, 2011 at 3:10 am
WOAH!
I always say that the person who hates is a loser. Nice job, musicispassion!!
 
musicispassion replied...
Jul. 3, 2011 at 3:23 am
thank you Alon_Freevoice:P
 
CarrieAnn13 said...
Jun. 16, 2011 at 9:38 pm
Hatred is a powerful emotion and your poem describes it quite well. Usually, it's just lurking below the surface. Great job!
 
musicispassion replied...
Jun. 28, 2011 at 1:08 am
thank you it means alot to hear someone say they like it
 
JoPepper said...
Jun. 15, 2011 at 2:36 pm
I thought that was great!!!!!  What's the book Cryers Cross about you mention it alot? Great job!!!!
 
musicispassion replied...
Jun. 15, 2011 at 6:52 pm
it's a rally good book about a posessed desk u should read i don't want to give anything away thanks
 
JoPepper replied...
Jun. 16, 2011 at 11:27 am
You're very welcome and thank you!
 
alex198 said...
May 11, 2011 at 1:37 pm
Wow, that is such a great description of a feeling. You portrayed how a person feels when they're angry really well. :)
 
musicispassion replied...
May 11, 2011 at 6:18 pm

thanks

 

 
musicispassion replied...
May 13, 2011 at 12:29 pm
please  comment i love to hear feedback positive or negative
 
musicispassion said...
May 9, 2011 at 10:23 pm
any one plz comment i love to hear feedback
 
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