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Luis is a kind and gentle sole…
Luis has a smile that can light up the world after years of war…
Luis has the loveliest brown eyes that look like they were made from mother earth herself…
Luis has a body that drives me crazy…
When he’s near me he makes me feel sane…
When I look in to his eyes I feel safe as if no one can harm me…
When hear him call my name it gives me butterflies…
Luis is the name of this sole I speak of.



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Natasha1994This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Nov. 10, 2011 at 1:26 pm:

i kinda get this poem but not all of it good job

 

 
summermarrie replied...
Nov. 10, 2011 at 6:53 pm :
thanx ...he was a summer crush
 
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