luis my love

April 2, 2011
By summermarrie BRONZE, Tobyhanna,pa, Pennsylvania
summermarrie BRONZE, Tobyhanna,pa, Pennsylvania
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Favorite Quote:
live well laugh offten love much.... cry less love alot be happy... if you love something or someone so much let it go if it comes back it was ment to be....

Luis is a kind and gentle sole…
Luis has a smile that can light up the world after years of war…
Luis has the loveliest brown eyes that look like they were made from mother earth herself…
Luis has a body that drives me crazy…
When he’s near me he makes me feel sane…
When I look in to his eyes I feel safe as if no one can harm me…
When hear him call my name it gives me butterflies…
Luis is the name of this sole I speak of.

The author's comments:
a summer love he was a the light of my summer!

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summermarrie said...
on Nov. 10 2011 at 6:53 pm
thanx ...he was a summer crush

on Nov. 10 2011 at 1:26 pm
Natasha1994 SILVER, Arizona City, Arizona
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i kinda get this poem but not all of it good job



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