These Cuts

April 7, 2011
By Anonymous

The cuts, they are so deep
Blood wells, dripping to the floor
As the light fades, I hear him crying my name
He's begging me to stay, I whisper that I love him
I hear the sirens, then I knew
He was for real
I hear him crying,
His sobs, they help me climb back out of the deep, black hole I am in
I look up into his eyes and swear to never leave him
The cuts, they were so deep
But love,
Love healed me.


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on May. 7 2011 at 7:38 pm
ZombieDanceWithMe SILVER, Rockford, Illinois
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Favorite Quote:
“To die is nothing; but it is terrible not to live”



-Victor Hugo

I seriously almost cried.

keep up the good work! 


on May. 6 2011 at 11:05 pm
Roseyalia SILVER, Don&#39t Need To Know, California
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Favorite Quote:
Take my love, take my land, take me where I cannot stand. I don't care, I'm still free, you can't take the sky from me. Take me out to the black. Tell 'em I ain't coming back. Burn the land and boil the sea, but you can't take the sky from me.

I love the vivid imagery and powerful message about the power of love.  Keep writing!  Five stars!

on May. 6 2011 at 1:30 pm
Marzipan_City BRONZE, Rockford, Illinois
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Favorite Quote:
Float like a butterfly, sting like a bee - Muhammad Ali

This is really good!

on May. 6 2011 at 9:47 am
SaddieBaby96 SILVER, Davenport, New York
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Favorite Quote:
mhm. its not you its me. i am doing this because i dont want to hurt you. i love you so much my heat can just burst!

that is really good. i love it <3

on May. 5 2011 at 11:51 pm
get_a_grip SILVER, Union, New Jersey
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Favorite Quote:
"We stopped checking for monsters under our bed because we've realized they were inside us."

Beautiful.


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