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When You Left

When you left at the door
I fell to the ground
you made everyday perfect
with everything you did

You said goodbye and kissed my cheek
as you did, I felt so terrible
I could feel the tears on my face
pouring down like a river

Before you left, I looked at you
and fell to my knees
you turned away and shook your head
you walked out the door

And disappeared down the road
after you were gone
I knew I could never fall in love again
I would never love anyone as much as I love you





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allybymyself said...
May 7, 2011 at 10:07 pm
I know EXACTLY how you feel! It's very good and expresses the pain very well.
 
volleyball17 said...
May 6, 2011 at 12:42 pm
this is so good i know what your coming from.. so sorry though i hate the pain
 
XxXshadow_demonXxX replied...
May 6, 2011 at 2:12 pm
thank you.
 
SaddieBaby96 said...
May 6, 2011 at 9:43 am
this was really good and i could tell how you felt your a really good writer... and ik how you felt i have felt the same way before
 
XxXshadow_demonXxX replied...
May 6, 2011 at 10:59 am
thank you. he had left me for a while and then he came back.
 
saddiebaby96 replied...
May 9, 2011 at 11:07 am
yea i know how ya feel i have been in the same possition
 
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