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Watch it fall,
Watch it tear,
Watch it rip,
Watch him snip.
You knew what what waited ahead,
You knew where all this would end.
Watch it break,
Watch it fall,
That's what you get,
You heartless b***h.
He left you,
Like the rest,
Looks like you couldn't even pass his test.
Watch it run,
Watch it skip,
Watch him tap dance,
All over this s***.
He took your heart,
Tossed it with the rest,
Now you've got nothing,
But a hole in your chest.



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sweettThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Sept. 2, 2011 at 6:21 pm:

Excellent i loved it the rhyme scheme u used is perfect good job!

 

 
elisianicole101 replied...
Nov. 2, 2011 at 7:07 am :

Thank you.!!

that means alot(: glad you enjoyed it(:

 
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HerSilverTongue said...
May 11, 2011 at 1:34 am:
This is so good!! I love your style, and it flows very well. :)
 
elisianicole101 replied...
May 13, 2011 at 9:09 am :
Aww thank you((: that means sooo much(:
 
sweettThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Nov. 2, 2011 at 5:41 pm :
Welcome :)
 
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