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Flowing

April 2, 2011
By Loubee SILVER, Norwalk, Ohio
Loubee SILVER, Norwalk, Ohio
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Favorite Quote:
"Live your life to the fullest"


The words are flowing
The ideas spilling
My hand
My pen
Are not writing fast enough
Thousands of ideas popping into my mind
Millions of words trying to fight their way through my mind
Trying to get through my head to be written
Hundreds of thoughts coming at once
Trying to sort through them seems impossible
Trying to find the right words to describe
To try to explain what I am feeling
Trillions of available words that I could use
Zillions of guides for writing things
But I don’t need them
I am by myself
No one is helping me
No one is supervising me
No one is telling me that I am using the wrong words
I am all alone
I don’t need the help
The knowledge of others
I am all alone when it comes to this
It is up to me
Up to me to keep the words flowing


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Kai17 GOLD said...
on May. 4 2011 at 6:44 pm
Kai17 GOLD, Spokane, Washington
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Favorite Quote:
*beepbeep*
"Where to, Miss?"
"To the stars."

Totally! I love the poem, and identify with it too. Plus, it's good. :D Triple threat!

l.iney DIAMOND said...
on May. 4 2011 at 3:22 pm
l.iney DIAMOND, Shrewsbury, Massachusetts
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Favorite Quote:
100% of shots not taken won't go in. -Wayne Gretzky

I can relate so well to this poem it really describes how I feel when I write. Like teachers and books try to help you but really all you can do is listen to yourself. Great poem!

please read some of my pieces too :)