Eternal Rest

A serene way to look at it. Nice.

i really like it, its sad but good. In a way it makes me less afraid of dying, i like how a lot of you poems are short and simple but with a big meaning!

This is good but I didn't like "Your always with the ones you love"

It feels rephrased. I love the first line, though

This is a great poem (once again!).  Yeah, someone I loved died, but she is still with me and will continue to be for as long as I love.  My only criticism is that the fourth line seems out of place because it's so long.

This was really sad but sweet. I really enjoyed reading it. You're a really talented writer :)

i did you mentioned being a name known writer.thats a good career idea stick to it.btw i hope you know who this is lol

 

 

love this to u should think about posting your four metaphor on  here

plz comment!!!!!