Eternal Rest

April 2, 2011
By musicispassion PLATINUM, Perris, California
musicispassion PLATINUM, Perris, California
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Favorite Quote:
" Life is never easy for those who dream."
There are so many other quotes i need pages to write them


Death is the only time
you get to rest without
missing a thing. Not even
a loved one. Your always with the ones you love. It's like going to bed eternally.


The author's comments:
When I wrote this I was thinking about the loss of someone I loved who I feel with me everyday. I hope people will get that no matter who or when you lose someone they never really go away

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on Jul. 25 2011 at 9:26 pm
musicispassion PLATINUM, Perris, California
35 articles 0 photos 735 comments

Favorite Quote:
" Life is never easy for those who dream."
There are so many other quotes i need pages to write them

it''s funny that u use the word serene it's similar to my name and it's meaning can u guess? thanks :P

Kai17 GOLD said...
on Jul. 25 2011 at 12:04 pm
Kai17 GOLD, Spokane, Washington
17 articles 5 photos 340 comments

Favorite Quote:
*beepbeep*
"Where to, Miss?"
"To the stars."

A serene way to look at it. Nice.

on Jul. 24 2011 at 10:31 pm
musicispassion PLATINUM, Perris, California
35 articles 0 photos 735 comments

Favorite Quote:
" Life is never easy for those who dream."
There are so many other quotes i need pages to write them

thanks a lot i'm better at short pieces :P

on Jul. 24 2011 at 3:26 pm
Hazel-daisy GOLD, --, Other
19 articles 0 photos 324 comments

Favorite Quote:
It takes a lot of courage to show your dreams to someone else - Erna Bombeck

In three words i can sum up everything I've learned in life: it goes on -Robert Frost

Live, Love, Laugh - ______

Hope, Love, breathe <3 - Me

i really like it, its sad but good. In a way it makes me less afraid of dying, i like how a lot of you poems are short and simple but with a big meaning!

on Jul. 1 2011 at 8:59 pm
musicispassion PLATINUM, Perris, California
35 articles 0 photos 735 comments

Favorite Quote:
" Life is never easy for those who dream."
There are so many other quotes i need pages to write them

thanks sorry i'm gonna look at some of your stuff

on Jul. 1 2011 at 8:50 pm
musicispassion PLATINUM, Perris, California
35 articles 0 photos 735 comments

Favorite Quote:
" Life is never easy for those who dream."
There are so many other quotes i need pages to write them

thanks i like your username

on Jul. 1 2011 at 4:46 pm
ChildOfThePast SILVER, Raleigh, North Carolina
9 articles 0 photos 46 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Things change. And friends leave. And life doesn’t stop for anybody."

This is good but I didn't like "Your always with the ones you love"

It feels rephrased. I love the first line, though


on Jul. 1 2011 at 2:14 pm
CarrieAnn13 GOLD, Goodsoil, Other
12 articles 10 photos 1648 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I love deadlines. I like the whooshing sound they make as they fly by." --Douglas Adams

"The object of life is not to be on the side of the majority, but to escape finding oneself in the ranks of the insane." --Marcus Aurelius

This is a great poem (once again!).  Yeah, someone I loved died, but she is still with me and will continue to be for as long as I love.  My only criticism is that the fourth line seems out of place because it's so long.

on May. 13 2011 at 12:29 pm
musicispassion PLATINUM, Perris, California
35 articles 0 photos 735 comments

Favorite Quote:
" Life is never easy for those who dream."
There are so many other quotes i need pages to write them

please comment i love to hear feedback positive or negative

on May. 11 2011 at 6:21 pm
musicispassion PLATINUM, Perris, California
35 articles 0 photos 735 comments

Favorite Quote:
" Life is never easy for those who dream."
There are so many other quotes i need pages to write them

thank you  i'm glad you like it

alex198 said...
on May. 11 2011 at 1:38 pm
alex198, |, Other
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This was really sad but sweet. I really enjoyed reading it. You're a really talented writer :)

on May. 9 2011 at 9:17 pm
musicispassion PLATINUM, Perris, California
35 articles 0 photos 735 comments

Favorite Quote:
" Life is never easy for those who dream."
There are so many other quotes i need pages to write them

why thankyou and i do knowwho u are

on May. 8 2011 at 9:52 pm
Fuggin_Fuggers SILVER, San Jacinto, California
6 articles 0 photos 28 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Sometimes it not about winning the race,its just being apart of it."
"Life's like an hour glass glued to a table."

i did you mentioned being a name known writer.thats a good career idea stick to it.btw i hope you know who this is lol

 

 


on May. 8 2011 at 8:36 pm
musicispassion PLATINUM, Perris, California
35 articles 0 photos 735 comments

Favorite Quote:
" Life is never easy for those who dream."
There are so many other quotes i need pages to write them

I did it's pending approval fromt he editors. look atmy profile.

on May. 8 2011 at 8:21 pm
Fuggin_Fuggers SILVER, San Jacinto, California
6 articles 0 photos 28 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Sometimes it not about winning the race,its just being apart of it."
"Life's like an hour glass glued to a table."

love this to u should think about posting your four metaphor on  here

on May. 4 2011 at 9:35 pm
musicispassion PLATINUM, Perris, California
35 articles 0 photos 735 comments

Favorite Quote:
" Life is never easy for those who dream."
There are so many other quotes i need pages to write them

anyone who reads this plz comment I love to hear feedback

on May. 4 2011 at 9:27 pm
musicispassion PLATINUM, Perris, California
35 articles 0 photos 735 comments

Favorite Quote:
" Life is never easy for those who dream."
There are so many other quotes i need pages to write them

hahaha reesa your awesome to

on May. 4 2011 at 5:46 pm
CallMeMrs.Batman SILVER, Moreno Valley, California
5 articles 0 photos 39 comments

Favorite Quote:
"It takes a great deal of courage to stand up to our enemies, but a great deal more to stand up to our friends."
-Professor Dumbledore to Harry Potter
"What doesn't kill you, makes you stronger."
-Unknown

This be the same person that wrote on your other post hahaha you know what "ren" you are sooo awesome

on May. 4 2011 at 12:35 pm
musicispassion PLATINUM, Perris, California
35 articles 0 photos 735 comments

Favorite Quote:
" Life is never easy for those who dream."
There are so many other quotes i need pages to write them

plz comment!!!!!


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