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Deceased

Your memory and love
will be passed down
as if it were a
stained and holey pair of hand
me down jeans




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snaomi This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Aug. 24, 2011 at 10:10 pm:
totally beautiful.  short but with so much impact.  love it.
 
musicispassion replied...
Aug. 25, 2011 at 10:13 pm :
thank you means alot
 
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CarrieAnn13This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Jun. 16, 2011 at 9:30 pm:
I can really feel your grief in this poem. It was good, very emotionally resonating. Good job, and my condolences. I know what it's like to lose a loved one.
 
musicispassion replied...
Jun. 16, 2011 at 10:22 pm :
thank you it means alot
 
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iheartu said...
May 11, 2011 at 9:57 pm:
hey u i love it its so good but it makes me wanna cry
 
musicispassion replied...
May 12, 2011 at 8:06 pm :
thank you you should look at some of my other stuff
 
musicispassion replied...
May 13, 2011 at 12:30 pm :
please comment i love to hear feedback positive or negative
 
iheartu replied...
May 13, 2011 at 7:24 pm :

oh dont worry i will luvs u and email me so i can talk to u so u can talk to me without a phone haha

 

 
musicispassion replied...
May 13, 2011 at 9:40 pm :
are you katelyn or emily
 
iheartu replied...
May 13, 2011 at 9:45 pm :
its katelyn
 
iheartu replied...
May 13, 2011 at 9:45 pm :
and thanks for knowing how to spell my name
 
musicispassion replied...
May 14, 2011 at 1:49 pm :
your welcome and i will email you
 
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alex198 said...
May 11, 2011 at 1:42 pm:
And btw, I know how you feel. It sucks when no one comments on your work :( but you're really good so don't let it get you down. :) Sometimes people just don't bother... x
 
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alex198 said...
May 11, 2011 at 1:40 pm:
I loved the comparison in this one! You found two things that are so different and made them sound the same. Really well written! I loved it :D
 
musicispassion replied...
May 11, 2011 at 6:19 pm :

thanks it means so much

 

 
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musicispassion said...
May 4, 2011 at 12:33 pm:
hello why is no one commenting on my poem???!!!!!!!
 
life-and-music99 replied...
May 4, 2011 at 5:43 pm :
Chick, you need to calm the heck down lol! You best know who this is cuz i dont wanna have to put my name on here and then get stalked haha you were awesome at track today...... i swear to God I am not a stalker I am her real friend... that was for people who dont know who I am hahaha
 
musicispassion replied...
May 4, 2011 at 9:30 pm :
i think u need to also you sweet at track today to hope u can make the meet
 
musicispassion replied...
May 4, 2011 at 9:34 pm :
anyone who reads this plz comment I love to hear feedback
 
life-and-music99 replied...
May 5, 2011 at 6:24 pm :
Hey you well as you know now I AM going to the meet and I just can't wait cuz I'm gunna be the best runner there with a hurt knee lol!
 
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