Deceased

April 2, 2011
By musicispassion PLATINUM, Perris, California
musicispassion PLATINUM, Perris, California
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Favorite Quote:
" Life is never easy for those who dream."
There are so many other quotes i need pages to write them


Your memory and love
will be passed down
as if it were a
stained and holey pair of hand
me down jeans


The author's comments:
I was thinking of seeing my great grandma lying in her coffin looking peaceful and calm. She was a beautiful person inside and out.I hope people will get that dying isn't as horrible as people make it out to be.

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on Aug. 25 2011 at 10:13 pm
musicispassion PLATINUM, Perris, California
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Favorite Quote:
" Life is never easy for those who dream."
There are so many other quotes i need pages to write them

thank you means alot

on Aug. 24 2011 at 10:10 pm
snaomi PLATINUM, Cheshire, Connecticut
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totally beautiful.  short but with so much impact.  love it.

on Jun. 16 2011 at 10:22 pm
musicispassion PLATINUM, Perris, California
35 articles 0 photos 735 comments

Favorite Quote:
" Life is never easy for those who dream."
There are so many other quotes i need pages to write them

thank you it means alot

on Jun. 16 2011 at 9:30 pm
CarrieAnn13 GOLD, Goodsoil, Other
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Favorite Quote:
"I love deadlines. I like the whooshing sound they make as they fly by." --Douglas Adams

"The object of life is not to be on the side of the majority, but to escape finding oneself in the ranks of the insane." --Marcus Aurelius

I can really feel your grief in this poem. It was good, very emotionally resonating. Good job, and my condolences. I know what it's like to lose a loved one.

on May. 14 2011 at 1:49 pm
musicispassion PLATINUM, Perris, California
35 articles 0 photos 735 comments

Favorite Quote:
" Life is never easy for those who dream."
There are so many other quotes i need pages to write them

your welcome and i will email you

iheartu SILVER said...
on May. 13 2011 at 9:45 pm
iheartu SILVER, Nuevo, California
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Favorite Quote:
best friends always leave footprints in your heart forever.
laugh ur heart out
dance in the rain
cherish the moment
ignore the pain
live, laugh, love
forgive&forget
lifes too short to be
living with regrets

and thanks for knowing how to spell my name

iheartu SILVER said...
on May. 13 2011 at 9:45 pm
iheartu SILVER, Nuevo, California
6 articles 0 photos 14 comments

Favorite Quote:
best friends always leave footprints in your heart forever.
laugh ur heart out
dance in the rain
cherish the moment
ignore the pain
live, laugh, love
forgive&forget
lifes too short to be
living with regrets

its katelyn

on May. 13 2011 at 9:40 pm
musicispassion PLATINUM, Perris, California
35 articles 0 photos 735 comments

Favorite Quote:
" Life is never easy for those who dream."
There are so many other quotes i need pages to write them

are you katelyn or emily

iheartu SILVER said...
on May. 13 2011 at 7:24 pm
iheartu SILVER, Nuevo, California
6 articles 0 photos 14 comments

Favorite Quote:
best friends always leave footprints in your heart forever.
laugh ur heart out
dance in the rain
cherish the moment
ignore the pain
live, laugh, love
forgive&forget
lifes too short to be
living with regrets

oh dont worry i will luvs u and email me so i can talk to u so u can talk to me without a phone haha

 


on May. 13 2011 at 12:30 pm
musicispassion PLATINUM, Perris, California
35 articles 0 photos 735 comments

Favorite Quote:
" Life is never easy for those who dream."
There are so many other quotes i need pages to write them

please comment i love to hear feedback positive or negative

on May. 12 2011 at 8:06 pm
musicispassion PLATINUM, Perris, California
35 articles 0 photos 735 comments

Favorite Quote:
" Life is never easy for those who dream."
There are so many other quotes i need pages to write them

thank you you should look at some of my other stuff

iheartu SILVER said...
on May. 11 2011 at 9:57 pm
iheartu SILVER, Nuevo, California
6 articles 0 photos 14 comments

Favorite Quote:
best friends always leave footprints in your heart forever.
laugh ur heart out
dance in the rain
cherish the moment
ignore the pain
live, laugh, love
forgive&forget
lifes too short to be
living with regrets

hey u i love it its so good but it makes me wanna cry

on May. 11 2011 at 6:19 pm
musicispassion PLATINUM, Perris, California
35 articles 0 photos 735 comments

Favorite Quote:
" Life is never easy for those who dream."
There are so many other quotes i need pages to write them

thanks it means so much

 


alex198 said...
on May. 11 2011 at 1:42 pm
alex198, |, Other
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And btw, I know how you feel. It sucks when no one comments on your work :( but you're really good so don't let it get you down. :) Sometimes people just don't bother... x

alex198 said...
on May. 11 2011 at 1:40 pm
alex198, |, Other
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I loved the comparison in this one! You found two things that are so different and made them sound the same. Really well written! I loved it :D

on May. 8 2011 at 3:13 pm
musicispassion PLATINUM, Perris, California
35 articles 0 photos 735 comments

Favorite Quote:
" Life is never easy for those who dream."
There are so many other quotes i need pages to write them

thanks

 


on May. 7 2011 at 8:01 pm
Fuggin_Fuggers SILVER, San Jacinto, California
6 articles 0 photos 28 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Sometimes it not about winning the race,its just being apart of it."
"Life's like an hour glass glued to a table."

hey hey hey love your poem so much keep it up loves u

on May. 5 2011 at 10:09 pm
musicispassion PLATINUM, Perris, California
35 articles 0 photos 735 comments

Favorite Quote:
" Life is never easy for those who dream."
There are so many other quotes i need pages to write them

hahaha sweet i'll look get ready 2 party

on May. 5 2011 at 7:41 pm
CallMeMrs.Batman SILVER, Moreno Valley, California
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Favorite Quote:
"It takes a great deal of courage to stand up to our enemies, but a great deal more to stand up to our friends."
-Professor Dumbledore to Harry Potter
"What doesn't kill you, makes you stronger."
-Unknown

So hey I know that I already left you a commment but I just had to let you know that I wrote something new... if you search If Only... then it should be there. :)

on May. 5 2011 at 6:24 pm
CallMeMrs.Batman SILVER, Moreno Valley, California
5 articles 0 photos 39 comments

Favorite Quote:
"It takes a great deal of courage to stand up to our enemies, but a great deal more to stand up to our friends."
-Professor Dumbledore to Harry Potter
"What doesn't kill you, makes you stronger."
-Unknown

Hey you well as you know now I AM going to the meet and I just can't wait cuz I'm gunna be the best runner there with a hurt knee lol!


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