Your memory and love
will be passed down
as if it were a
stained and holey pair of hand
me down jeans
will be passed down
as if it were a
stained and holey pair of hand
me down jeans
snaomi
totally beautiful. short but with so much impact. love it.
CarrieAnn13
I can really feel your grief in this poem. It was good, very emotionally resonating. Good job, and my condolences. I know what it's like to lose a loved one.
iheartuhey u i love it its so good but it makes me wanna cry
thank you you should look at some of my other stuff
please comment i love to hear feedback positive or negative
oh dont worry i will luvs u and email me so i can talk to u so u can talk to me without a phone haha
And btw, I know how you feel. It sucks when no one comments on your work :( but you're really good so don't let it get you down. :) Sometimes people just don't bother... x
I loved the comparison in this one! You found two things that are so different and made them sound the same. Really well written! I loved it :D
hello why is no one commenting on my poem???!!!!!!!
life-and-music99Chick, you need to calm the heck down lol! You best know who this is cuz i dont wanna have to put my name on here and then get stalked haha you were awesome at track today...... i swear to God I am not a stalker I am her real friend... that was for people who dont know who I am hahaha
i think u need to also you sweet at track today to hope u can make the meet
anyone who reads this plz comment I love to hear feedback
Hey you well as you know now I AM going to the meet and I just can't wait cuz I'm gunna be the best runner there with a hurt knee lol!
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