April 2, 2011
Your memory and love
will be passed down
as if it were a
stained and holey pair of hand
me down jeans

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snaomi This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Aug. 24, 2011 at 10:10 pm
totally beautiful.  short but with so much impact.  love it.
musicispassion replied...
Aug. 25, 2011 at 10:13 pm
thank you means alot
CarrieAnn13 said...
Jun. 16, 2011 at 9:30 pm
I can really feel your grief in this poem. It was good, very emotionally resonating. Good job, and my condolences. I know what it's like to lose a loved one.
musicispassion replied...
Jun. 16, 2011 at 10:22 pm
thank you it means alot
iheartu said...
May 11, 2011 at 9:57 pm
hey u i love it its so good but it makes me wanna cry
musicispassion replied...
May 12, 2011 at 8:06 pm
thank you you should look at some of my other stuff
musicispassion replied...
May 13, 2011 at 12:30 pm
please comment i love to hear feedback positive or negative
iheartu replied...
May 13, 2011 at 7:24 pm

oh dont worry i will luvs u and email me so i can talk to u so u can talk to me without a phone haha


musicispassion replied...
May 13, 2011 at 9:40 pm
are you katelyn or emily
iheartu replied...
May 13, 2011 at 9:45 pm
its katelyn
iheartu replied...
May 13, 2011 at 9:45 pm
and thanks for knowing how to spell my name
musicispassion replied...
May 14, 2011 at 1:49 pm
your welcome and i will email you
alex198 said...
May 11, 2011 at 1:42 pm
And btw, I know how you feel. It sucks when no one comments on your work :( but you're really good so don't let it get you down. :) Sometimes people just don't bother... x
alex198 said...
May 11, 2011 at 1:40 pm
I loved the comparison in this one! You found two things that are so different and made them sound the same. Really well written! I loved it :D
musicispassion replied...
May 11, 2011 at 6:19 pm

thanks it means so much


musicispassion said...
May 4, 2011 at 12:33 pm
hello why is no one commenting on my poem???!!!!!!!
life-and-music99 replied...
May 4, 2011 at 5:43 pm
Chick, you need to calm the heck down lol! You best know who this is cuz i dont wanna have to put my name on here and then get stalked haha you were awesome at track today...... i swear to God I am not a stalker I am her real friend... that was for people who dont know who I am hahaha
musicispassion replied...
May 4, 2011 at 9:30 pm
i think u need to also you sweet at track today to hope u can make the meet
musicispassion replied...
May 4, 2011 at 9:34 pm
anyone who reads this plz comment I love to hear feedback
life-and-music99 replied...
May 5, 2011 at 6:24 pm
Hey you well as you know now I AM going to the meet and I just can't wait cuz I'm gunna be the best runner there with a hurt knee lol!
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