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April 1, 2011
By Untouchable-Summer SILVER, Cranford, New Jersey
Untouchable-Summer SILVER, Cranford, New Jersey
6 articles 0 photos 86 comments

Favorite Quote:
Even the best fall down sometimes


Every time we
catch each others' eyes,
we remember
that day.
And we turn away.
My cheeks pink,
your eyes cast down,
we both pretend that what happened
meant nothing.
But to me,
it did.
You were my first.
Did you know that?
Maybe that's why it felt so...
Unreal
like a fairy tale.
You were my prince
and I wanted you to take me away.
But you changed after that day.
And I knew anything we had,
was gone.
You, and your gorgeous blue eyes.
I wish I noticed
their ice
before I fell
for your smile.


The author's comments:
Based on a personal experience.

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on May. 29 2011 at 6:56 pm
Untouchable-Summer SILVER, Cranford, New Jersey
6 articles 0 photos 86 comments

Favorite Quote:
Even the best fall down sometimes

Thank you!

on May. 29 2011 at 6:45 pm
AndySixxLover GOLD, Weatherford, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
These violent delights have violent ends and in there triumph die like fire and powder in witch their kiss consume

I loved it!!!!

on May. 25 2011 at 9:29 pm
Untouchable-Summer SILVER, Cranford, New Jersey
6 articles 0 photos 86 comments

Favorite Quote:
Even the best fall down sometimes

About to look at them right now :) And you're very welcome! :)

Shmelmo GOLD said...
on May. 25 2011 at 8:26 pm
Shmelmo GOLD, Elma, Iowa
16 articles 9 photos 143 comments

Favorite Quote:
You never know how strong you are until being strong is the only choice you have.

Some of my writings include "Brooke's Sunset" and "Who Do You Say That I Am?" I also have some photos: "Through the Window" and "A Sign of Spring." Thank You SO much. :D

on May. 25 2011 at 5:42 am
Untouchable-Summer SILVER, Cranford, New Jersey
6 articles 0 photos 86 comments

Favorite Quote:
Even the best fall down sometimes

Hey, sorry about your breakup :/ But thanks for the great feedback...I'm glad you could relate to my poem! :) If you have a chance could you check out my other work called Asthma, Smile, and If Only? Thanks:)

ohdear BRONZE said...
on May. 24 2011 at 9:45 pm
ohdear BRONZE, Tacoma, Washington
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You have no idea what this poem means to me! It describes my emotions perfectly. I'm just going through my first break up with my (obviously) first boyfriend. This poem...is so perfect. He had blue eyes too..I think I might cry. Beautiful. Keep it up :)

on May. 24 2011 at 6:00 pm
Untouchable-Summer SILVER, Cranford, New Jersey
6 articles 0 photos 86 comments

Favorite Quote:
Even the best fall down sometimes

WOW!! Thanks so much Shmelmo!! That means a lot :) What's the name of one of your pieces of writing? I'll definitely check it out and all your others, too! Thanks again for the great comment!

Shmelmo GOLD said...
on May. 24 2011 at 5:32 pm
Shmelmo GOLD, Elma, Iowa
16 articles 9 photos 143 comments

Favorite Quote:
You never know how strong you are until being strong is the only choice you have.

Anyone who could check out/comment my work would be GREATLY appreciated. Thanks!

Shmelmo GOLD said...
on May. 24 2011 at 5:31 pm
Shmelmo GOLD, Elma, Iowa
16 articles 9 photos 143 comments

Favorite Quote:
You never know how strong you are until being strong is the only choice you have.

Wow, I love all of your work and I am going to keep up with it. It is always inspiring to read and they give good advice. In this poem I like you, and your gorgeous blue eyes. I wish I noticed their ice before I fell for your smile.

Please Keep writing!!! :D


on May. 3 2011 at 6:55 pm
Untouchable-Summer SILVER, Cranford, New Jersey
6 articles 0 photos 86 comments

Favorite Quote:
Even the best fall down sometimes

ANY COMMENTS/RATINGS WILL BE MUCH APPRECIATED- I WOULD LOVE YOUR FEEDBACK! :)

on May. 3 2011 at 6:55 pm
Untouchable-Summer SILVER, Cranford, New Jersey
6 articles 0 photos 86 comments

Favorite Quote:
Even the best fall down sometimes

aww thank you! yes, us teens should really work on that... ;)

on May. 3 2011 at 4:55 pm
YoungsurvivorLiz SILVER, San Jose, California
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Favorite Quote:
"A bend in the road is not the end of the road- unless you fail to make the turn"

this poem touched my heart!!!! && as a teen we all make choices before we even think them through 


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