Rushing Water

One too many tears
have been one too many cried.
One too many fears
brought up when you lied.
Salt water tears will erode away
the stone wall promise I made to stay.
A broken dam through which this river flows
Rushing past everything it knows.
And away is where it carries me.
To a destination I do not know.
Where I will be you will have to see.
I have to follow the flow.





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book.junkie said...
Jul. 30, 2011 at 4:27 pm
i'm sorry to hear about u and ur bf but i hope you don't tak offence when after i read this poem i could resist giving it one too many praises, i couldn't help but think one too many amusing thoughts about it and i'm sure it couldn't help but subject me to always feel like that when i am finish reading this poem one too many times. if you don't mind can you please read my work thank you
 
FirePixie203 replied...
Aug. 18, 2011 at 12:37 pm
Thanks for the feedback. Very creative. And I'll take a look at your work.
 
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