Rushing Water

April 6, 2011
By FirePixie203 BRONZE, Trevor, Wisconsin
FirePixie203 BRONZE, Trevor, Wisconsin
3 articles 2 photos 5 comments

One too many tears
have been one too many cried.
One too many fears
brought up when you lied.
Salt water tears will erode away
the stone wall promise I made to stay.
A broken dam through which this river flows
Rushing past everything it knows.
And away is where it carries me.
To a destination I do not know.
Where I will be you will have to see.
I have to follow the flow.

The author's comments:
I have cried way too many tears over my boyfriend but I do it because I care. I guess I care way too much. But I have a feeling there will come a day when I will have cried one too many.

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This article has 2 comments.

on Aug. 18 2011 at 12:37 pm
FirePixie203 BRONZE, Trevor, Wisconsin
3 articles 2 photos 5 comments
Thanks for the feedback. Very creative. And I'll take a look at your work.

on Jul. 30 2011 at 4:27 pm
book.junkie GOLD, Kingston, Other
18 articles 1 photo 48 comments
i'm sorry to hear about u and ur bf but i hope you don't tak offence when after i read this poem i could resist giving it one too many praises, i couldn't help but think one too many amusing thoughts about it and i'm sure it couldn't help but subject me to always feel like that when i am finish reading this poem one too many times. if you don't mind can you please read my work thank you

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